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Default [Ame Jounin] Setoguchi Yukiji

Note: I have received Kana's permission to try and reregister my old Ame Genin/Chuunin Yukiji as a Jounin to replace my current one Dr. Daiki. And here she is! One of my first characters on Engi and the first character I ever got to be promoted reimagined and as an "adult" nearly 10 years exactly after her creation. Weird feels going on! Anyway here she is!


Chibi Aka-Nin

Name: Setoguchi Yukiji
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Height: 5'0"

Character Type: Shinobi

Country/Village: Ame no Kuni / Amegakure no Sato
Rank: Jounin
Division: ---



Physical Description/Clothing:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Setoguchi Ayame
Yuki-chan? She's never been much to look at. Scrawny arms, knobbly knees and flat as a board...

Good luck with that.

I will say she's dressing fancier and fancier every day--wonder what she's trying to prove...or who she's trying to prove it to.
The former and most successful student of the Red Ninja Meinaka Ishuro is in many respects a different person now that she has been shaped by a career in Rain Country. At one point extremely undersized and malnourished, timid and small--Yukiji has done little to improve in stature but much to improve in standing. Her posture dictates a trained and measured poise and she remains someone who in spite of her young age is in possession of a certain elegance. Alabaster skin is flawless except for light scars and bruises only visible to the studied and trained eye. A skilled practitioner of the Decaying Fist style, it's wounds have been handled clearly and expertly by a combination of youthful vitality and very very skilled medics within the Amegakure underground.

Yukiji remains an exceptionally petite person and her 5'0" frame barely tips the scales at 90lbs, to assume that the small and skinny girl would be weak would be a mistake. Anyone who observes Yukiji's physique knows that she is tightly wound and nearly exclusionary made of muscle. While once a plain faced young girl her visage has been shaped by both necessity and professionalism, Sharp facial features are accentuated by a tasteful amount of make up and almond shaped almond colored eyes highlighted by black eye shadow. Constantly underestimated for her size and for her age Yukiji seeks to compensate for that by being as classy and poised as possible. Both the years of combat and her own personal experience with it in the heart of the war has shaped her demeanor without a doubt. Underneath her sweet and innocent surface it is clear to anyone that this is someone with the same ferocity and temperament of a cobra.

Her choice of dress has always sided on the conservative end and with a lack of figure to really show off she mostly sticks to slimming black blouses paired with large billowy skirts. Yukiji detests high heels preferring flats due to mobility but she loves large pieces of clothing with many many pockets for many many obvious shinobi reasons. Recently due to her time spent as an undercover mercenary she has acquired a taste to wearing large gaudy pieces of clothing--diamond watches, thin gold rope chains and big hoop earrings. Being a single young Jounin in the Amegakure with a measure of fame has even gotten her the opportunity to afford Shichou stitched clothing. Dark color and formal wear both the preferred outfit on the field and off...

Yukiji finds that blood washes best off of black. Sometimes crimson when she feels extra nostalgic.

Personality:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hageshi Ken
You must understand fear so you can manipulate it. Fear is like fire. You can make it work for you; it can warm you in the winter, cook your food when you’re hungry, give you light when you’re in the dark and produce energy. Let it go out of control and it can hurt you, even kill you…fear is a friend of exceptional people.
While looking at her initial files out of the academy it is hard to understand that the Yukiji we have today and the Yukiji we had then are the same. In many respects she is a testament to the new school of Rain Shinobi and she has been shaped by the coldness of life underground as well as endless conflict with the rain military. This has bred a certain callousness and blood thirstiness that is completely atypical in a child her age. Yukiji's earliest days were marked by exceptional familial conflict but those conflicts have ended years ago and shed from the burdens of her families insecurities and arguments have allowed the young woman to flourish. Yukiji is no longer a shy individual and she lacks a codependency or expecting that anyone or anything had any particular interest in her. She hadn't spoken to her family in years and her friends still remain isolated among her former sensei and role model Meinaka Ishuro and her teammate Ueda Chuu. Her former teammate and original rival Tojiro having been out of her life due to circumstance and bad luck for far too long.

Yukiji is someone who is naturally private and reserved though the last few years have forced her to get out of her comfort zone. While spending the last year deep undercover as a samurai mercenary in the Rain Army she has developed certain habits that she didn't have before. She is exceptionally well spoken while discussing things in public, very much capable of hiding her emotions and preferring to handle things with a calmness and reservedness that was previously not seen by the adept kunoichi. She is a woman of two sides, of incredible grace and of insatiable appetites.

The main thing being for violence. The second for steaks--tomahawk ribeyes, cooked to medium rare.

As a young lass she was obsessed with her own legacy and with climbing the literal mountain that was her sensei the Sennin Meinaka Ishuro. For a long time as a youth she was driven solely by the urge to best her master but soon exposure to the loss of life and the stress of shinobidom brought such childish fantasies to an end. Yukiji remained a person of ambition, a person exceptionally skilled in compartmentalizing her own conflicted nature and emotions and this allowed for her to focus completely and utterly on her career. She is a confident sort, promoted to Chuunin early and Jounin earlier--but such is the result of a generation of war? Yukiji has known for a long time that the path of shinobi was a path of slaughter and she had embraced that reality as a Genin.

The freshly promoted Jounin has learned how to politic to a degree--her wry sense of humor learned at the foot of her talented and over the top sensei remains one of her greatest assets in social situations. Her own Jounin promotion was the result of playing deep cover within the Rain military for the purpose of revealing weapon shipment locations as well as counts of soldiers and locations prior to battles. This has caused Yukiji to become much more of a charmer than her formerly shy persona would dictate. She isn't the life of the party but when pressed she is someone capable of being both shrewd and batting her newly discovered eyelashes. Once governed by fear and insecurity it is clear that Yukiji has adapted to the world of Amegakure and shifted that fear into fuel. She doesn't miss the past at all.

Overall, in spite of growing up in a sewer, Yukiji has developed into a well rounded professional with a good head on her shoulders and an insatiable appetite...

Yes, for steak, but ultimately now for respect and glory beyond her sensei's name and reputation.


Nindo; "Way of the Ninja":
"Blood runs truer than oaths."
Clan/Bloodline: None.
Primary Archetype:
Daredevil
Special: When taken as Primary Archetype, the character can defy the laws of damage once during each thread.
Pros: + 2 Stamina, + 1 Willpower
Cons: -2 Tactics, - 1 Intelligence
Secondary Archetype:
Human Tank
Pros: + 2 Strength, + 1 Stamina
Cons: - 2 Speed, - 1 Control

Statistics

Physical - Primary

Strength: 1 + 2 [HT] + 22 = 25 [+22 Chou Jin Genkotsu//Decaying Fist] Level 8
Speed: 1 - 2 [HT] + 17 = 16 [+15 Chigatana no Kenbu//Sword Dance of the Bloody Sword] Level 6
Stamina: 1 + 2 [DD] + 1 [HT] + 21 = 25 [+23 Chou Jin Genkotsu//Decaying Fist] Level 8

Mental - Secondary

Intelligence: 1 - 1 [DD] + 18 = 18
Tactics: 1 - 2 [DD] + 1 [AP] + 17 = 17
Willpower: 1 + 1 [DD] + 15 = 17

Chakra - Tertiary

Power: 1 + 13 = 14
Control: 1 - 1 [HT] + 14 = 14
Reserves: 1 + 13 = 14

Jutsus and Techniques

Chou Jin Genkotsu//Decaying Fist

[F1]Stage One: Stamina 5, Strength 3
[F2]Stage Two: Stamina 8, Strength 6, Willpower 6
[F3]Stage Three: Stamina 12, Strength 8, Willpower 8
[F4] Kukuru//Nine Times Gouging
[F5] Stage Four: Stamina 21, Strength 18, Willpower 14, Speed 3
[F6] Stage Five: Stamina 25, Strength 25, Willpower 16, Speed 6

Chigatana no Kenbu//Sword Dance of the Bloody Sword
[F7] Stage One: Strength 5, Stamina 3
[F8] Stage Two: Strength 7, Stamina 7, Willpower 6
[F9] Stage Three: Strength 12, Stamina 8, Willpower 8
[F10] Sakki no Kanji II//Feeling of Bloodlust I
[F11] Stage Four: Strength 16, Stamina 14, Speed 13, Willpower 14
[F12] Stage Five: Strength 22, Stamina 19, Speed 15, Willpower 16
[F13] Sakki no Kanji II//Feeling of Bloodlust II

Global Ninjutsu
Stage One
[F14] Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique): Control 3, Intelligence 2
Stage Two
[F15] Kinobori/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Tree Walking / Wall Walking Technique): Power 5, Control 4, Reserves 4
Stage Three
[F16] Kai: Intelligence 10, Tactics 10, Control 8
Stage Four
[F17] Shunshin no Jutsu (Instantaneous Body Technique): Power 12, Control 11, Reserves 10, Intelligence 12
Stage Five
[F18] Chidori (Thousand Birds): Intelligence 18, Tactics 17, Willpower 17, Control 14

Inventory
Shinobi Kit [Hidden] - 1
Quote:
Shinobi Kit is hidden amongst the folds and pockets of Yukiji's dress, can be detected if rubbed down--but why would you? It's 2018.
Shinigami no Hirune [+4 Cleaver Sword +1 Morph (Katana) + 1 Hidden ] - 6
Quote:
A rather innocent looking umbrella under normal circumstances, pink and frilly with a very famous animated cat with a bow in the middle of it. Through focusing chakra Yukiji can disengage the umbrella which serves as a sheath for a katana with some concentration she can morph said blade into a cleaver sword. It must return to katana size before the umbrella sheath can be added again.
Weapon Points Remaining: 1
Additional Weapon Points Gained: 0

Biography:

Early and Academy Years

Quote:
Originally Posted by Setoguchi Yukiji, Team Nine: Character, Setting, Exposition!
"“I became a shinobi b-because I...well because my sister and grandfather did and...well it’s my dad’s dream to have a family full of proud shinobi...I don’t really know what’s so proud about fighting. B-but it’s really the only career that seemed to suit me...or at least that I see myself doing.”

In spite of being one of the most promising young shinobi in Amegakure Setoguchi Yukiji comes from exceptionally humble beginnings. Her father Mr. Setoguchi was a member of the merchant class of Sector One specializing specifically in the makings of fine kunai. Her mother, Ms. Setoguchi was a particularly petty and greedy woman, elderly but unaffected by childbirth and age--she spent most of her days manufacturing gossip and sipping very cheap red wine. Her sister Setoguchi Ayame is a relatively mediocre and unambitious ninja, a Chuunin Academy Instructor and new mother. Her and Yukiji rarely exchanged words as children and when Yukiji would ask for sisterly affection Ayame often advised Yukiji to look towards her large stuffed animal collection.

Yukiji herself was a painfully introverted girl with no friends to speak of at the academy and with interests few and far in between. For as long as she could remember, she lived a monotonous and unvarying routine consisting of waking up in the morning, eating breakfast, going to the academy, returning home, eating dinner in silence with what family members are present, and quietly spending the rest of her evenings behind the closed door of her room, holding her stuffed animals. Little changed in this routine as Yukiji progressed from her childhood until she attained the rank of Genin.

At the academy, Yukiji was a solitary figure who was rarely acknowledged or noticed by her fellow classmates, except at times when they had been forced to work with her for assignments. Due to the fact that she never made an active attempt to interact with others or involve herself in group activities, she was generally dismissed as an unremarkable figure, always timid, always withdrawn. There were those who saw her as ‘creepy’, due to her isolated nature and the fact that she never spoke to anyone, had any friends, or was involved with any after school training sessions. Yukiji always tried her best to ignore her classmates and teachers, which worked out well, since they rarely paid much attention to her.

Her days in the academy were largely spent quietly taking notes and spending most of her days in observation and her nights in quiet but constant training in her back yard. There was a fire and a freedom she took when she held a sword or imagined herself taking out imaginary foes pinning her down in defeat. She trained constantly as both an escape from her own isolation and her own shadows. It was through steel and sweat that she found her liberty.

When it came down to her graduation she found herself smack dab in the middle of most tests but surprisingly within the top three in taijutsu among her classmates--within an eight man tournament winning 2 matches and having 1 draw due to her unparalleled and previously unseen stamina. This display guaranteed that the previous unknown taijutsu specialist would attain the rank of Genin, it was the decision to put her on an experimental team that really allowed for her skills to flourish.


Genin Years and Chuunin Promotion

Quote:
Originally Posted by Setoguchi Yukiji, Accident Prone
Obviously I planned to get launched into a ceiling. You know I got promoted to Chuunin? I know he’s a Jounin but I expected to at least do something against him…nearly sliced him clean in half when I was a genin. Everything is fixable though, right?
It was obvious that either due to her potential or the lack of risk in losing her Yukiji was chosen for the experimental team known as Team #9. This team was headed by the Youkai Special Forces member and the future Sennin Meinaka Ishuro. The goal was to create another potential Youkai and to shape Genin that would normally be considered mentally deficient or weak into true killing machines and soldiers of Rain. The two initial members of Team 9 were Yukiji and a boy with multiple personalities known as Kazutada Tojiro. On their first day meeting Ishuro forced them to duel to the death, a task both failed miserably at--but it planted the seeds of what was to come.

On her first mission and Tojiro’s second, the two were instructed to gain the financial and verbal alliance of a rather prominent merchant on the surface, but this was no mere merchant: this was a man who claimed to be the head of a grand portion of Rain Country’s black market. While on this mission, Yukiji stepped out of her shell for the first time when a squad of Rain soldiers attacked the building they were staying at mere moments after the man had agreed to go to Rain. It was there that Tojiro and Yukiji were forced to eliminate four men who had attacked them and it was then that they both learned that the idea of a clean kill was just that: a myth. The most shocking thing of this encounter was the reactions of the two genin, while Tojiro swore never to kill again, Yukiji enjoyed the change of pace. Being powerless her entire life, the power she had over somebody’s life felt intoxicating. Victim would soon turn to violence as an outlet. A tale as old as time.

While Yukiji developed into a successful ninja, her family life quickly began to deteriorate. Her mother was caught having an affair with the gardener and in typical Setoguchi fashion…well they couldn’t care less. Yukiji’s elder sister left to be with her sensei/boyfriend, her mother left to be with her landscaper lover, and her father? He simply retreated to Stone…far more content to leave his funds with the youngest daughter he had never cared about and focus on a business that ultimately meant nothing since he had no family to support through it. At this point Ishuro moved in with Yukiji and the distant powerful ninja quickly became a surrogate father figure for the young girl…though she quickly began to interpret all of that as a crush. Ishuro lived with Yukiji for the remainder of her Genin and the beginning of her Chuunin career but soon left her independent not long after her promotion.

The biggest moment of her Genin life and the moment that made her the most famous would be the infamous time Team Nine stormed a fortress in order to free several carpenters to help in the construction of New Amegakure. While Tojiro and their new teammate (Chuu), focused on getting the carpenters, it was Yukiji and Ishuro who handled most of the combat. Ishuro of course was able to take the majority of the battalion stationed at the fort, but Yukiji took on an entire squad of soldiers in her own right. The Red Ninja finally had an apprentice…and this girl was nearly as frightening as the man who had trained her.

This mission made both Yukiji and Team Nine a household name in Amegakure, but it wasn’t until Yukiji aided the war effort once more that she was promoted to Chuunin. That mission involved Yukiji and Ishuro infiltrating a party at the Daimyo’s place in order to gain access to the locations of all the Rain Military’s forts. What was surprising about this mission was not that it succeeded, but that Yukiji and Ishuro were capable of doing it without taking a single life.

Yukiji’s status as a war hero and one of the rising stars in the village was undeniable and when strangers told her how amazing she was, when random ninja would lose to her in spars…Yukiji’s ego grew. So quickly had she changed from nothing to something that Yukiji convinced herself that it had something to do with some innate talent in either herself or Ishuro, this belief and pride in her work grew to the point where she refused to acknowledge anybody else being worthy of respect.

She would soon find herself humbled.

Jounin Promotion
Quote:
Originally Posted by Meinaka Ishuro, Team Nine: The Challenge
"Standing there, you know that would get you killed, right? If I was going to be serious, I'd have you slumped over your own blade. That's your weak side. It's easy to see how you're favoring the other in that stance even if I couldn't see that it's misplaced for the stance you think you're in. A little too far out, toes pointed the wrong direction. You might want to work on that."
Shortly after her promotion to Chuunin, Yukiji was placed within a bit of a professional limbo. Her skills had been honed to perfection with Ishuro but she was not a good team player and her own ambitious drive combined with her young age (14 at promotion) often caused her to live on an island of her own. A lone wolf with no house breaking--but with a penchant for violence and ferocity that placed her above her compatriots.

Due to Ishuro's own status and promotion and her role as his student, there was a time period where Yukiji was being given extraordinary opportunity as befitting the known disciple of a Sennin. She worked within the Amekage's office herself, serving as one of Ayame's personal assistants and couriers for a period of time. It was this period of time within the Amekage's office that forced Yukiji off a bit of her single minded determination to conquer Ishuro. It was at the foot of the government of Rain and through observation of their young leader that Yukiji the professional began to emerge. Team Nine and Meinaka Ishuro had turned her into a shinobi--it was the banality of office work with the raised stake of being witness to all that went in running a village literally among the rats that shaped her into a professional.

It refined her and it shaped her and after a year of odd jobs and such she was finally given an opportunity by Ayame herself.

Amegakure had managed to infiltrate a mercenary group now formally being outsourced and hired by the Rain Government. Yukiji's job would be to eyes on the surface, a scout and double agent for her own people.

The first step was to infiltrate the Mercenaries--a group of Ronin named simply the Commodores. Lead by a fierce and powerful Ronin from Stone who claimed that his very sword had been forged with a bit of moon rock itself.

A girl who grew up without a strong family structure looks for father figures wherever they may be. Higashi Ken became that. Largely because the infiltration was done by the murdering of Ken's own daughter after a month or so of reconnaissance by Yukiji. Which would then be followed up by a full year of gathering and distributing information while disguised as Ken's daughter Makoto over Henge. Yukiji's own father had been distant and Ishuro's brand of love could hardly be called that--but living under the guise of Higashi Makoto she began to experience something she never had. Familial love. It was deceptive and cold but Yukiji enjoyed the mission assigned to her far more than she thought she would...

And training underneath the Ronin samurai who had long forsaken his vows and struggled with his own morals as he brought up his daughter in a world of violence--did wonders for her skills as well.

The Commodores were contracted to work and hunt Rain-Nin throughout the country and while serving as a double agent Yukiji struck a delicate balance of appearing to fight her compatriots while also not taking their lives. Restraint refined her skills even more so than even working under Higashi. Working as a spy within the Ame Government compound was both stressful but also an opportunity and Yukiji having trained at the foot of a Sennin and witnessing the work of a Kage knew that was this opportunity to shine. There was a decisive battle decided by Yukiji revealing numbers of soldiers Ame had on the way towards an ambush based on getting access to the clothing requisition after some flirting and minor seduction of a tailor.

This relationship added another wrinkle and another informant beyond Ken's mercenary group. This tailor often worked directly on Ame Generals themselves and nobody gave much note to the Ronin's daughter who spent an awful lot of time in the tailor's office while she was within the capital. It was this link that directly lead to her promotion--after the Kage summit.

Transporting the Amekage through a war torn country in the midst of a civil war to the very public Kage summit would be an extreme test of the ability of the Ame-Nin to move undetected throughout the country. The Kage and her entourage included the Sennin Ishuro, very dangerous but big trophies for the Rain government. It was in her lovers house that she overheard a particularly drunk and stodgy Ame General mutter while getting his jacket fixed to prepare for a big celebration.

"Soon the Shinobi leader will be in our grasp, we plan to ambush her with a large amount of our forces almost as soon as she comes within the country. Our spies and scouts claim to have spot the way they used to exit Ame no Kuni. We won't let them enter it the same way."

Whether true or not Yukiji noted the gathering of forces and was able to tip off the powers that be with enough time for them to organize a new way to get Ayame and her entourage back to Rain. Yukiji never knew how much her information had helped but when no celebration ensued and she received word of her own that she was to organize her own departure from the Commodores and return to Amegakure right away. She assumed that her information hadn't been entirely useless. Now it was time organize an exit from her life as a double agent--that was much more easy than it should've been.

While on recon with Higashi and the rest of the company of about twenty or so mercenaries, Yukiji waited until they were on their own, before dispelling her Henge for the first time in public in months. She killed Ken in cold blood before he could notice that she hadn't been his daughter after all. Every mercenary man killed in a one sided struggle with Yukiji receiving very little wounds in the brutality and chaos of conflict. Hit em quick, hit em hard, get out fast. Rules that had always guided her and did so then. The mask off felt strange and the potential to return home to her old life seemed even foreign. How much had she changed? How much of Makoto's style and brain had embedded unto her? Too many questions and too little answers awaited her. There would be no way to find out but time.

When she returned to Amegakure she was greeted by Ayame herself who thanked her for the sacrifice and information her year long spy mission had given them. Yukiji as a spy had more than exceeded expectations and while the war still waged it was time to put her to more use. To give her a command. The molding of Setoguchi Yukiji, from shy and timid academy student--to professional and skilled Jounin of Rain had been completed.

Now the real work could begin.

Thread Log:

Old Threads
06/26/08: Team Nine - Character, Setting, Exposition! - +2 Willpower
06/26/08: 2 AP - +2 Strength
07/13/07: 1 AP - +1 Strength
07/31/08: Team Nine - Though We May Not Survive It - +2 Strength, Stage Three CnK AP added
08/14/08: +1 Stamina, Sakki no Kanji GMAP
11/04/08: +2 Stamina GMAP
11/26/08: Team Nine - Through Tears and Steam - +1 Stamina, Stage 3 Decaying Fist
11/27/08: Team Nine - Don't Run, Don't Fear - +1 Speed, Kukuru! added to Decaying Fist Special Techniques
11/28/08:Team Nine: Fear through Eyes of Madness - +1 Speed, Hard Qigong added to Decaying Fist Special Techniques
11/30/08: Masochism at AP
12/01/08: Team Nine: A New Teammate! - +2 Speed
12/22/08: Team Nine: Curry of Life - +2 Speed
01/04/2009: +2 Speed GMAP
07/30/2009: Plateau - +2 Intelligence, +1 Power, Control (AP)
7/30/2009: Team Nine: The Challenge - +2 Power
10/31/2009: Team Nine: Master and Apprentice - +2 Speed, 1 GMAP: +1 Speed
01/28/2010: Crossing the Frame - +1
02/14/2010: Chuunin Promotion - +6 Willpower, +6 Tactics, +2 Intelligence, +4 Power, +4 Control, +4 Reserves, Magen: Narakumi and Kai; 2 GMAP: +1 Speed, Kinobori/Kabenobori; 2 AP: +2 Stamina
04/26/10: Accident Prone - +2 Strength
06/28/10: Brawling is an Artform - +2 Strength
08/10/11: AP - Stage Four Chigatana no Kenbu
12/28/12: A Happy Reunion - +2 Strength

Jounin Revamp
03/27/18: The Finisher- 1AP: Chidori
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Old 04-05-2018, 03:47 PM   #2
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she overheard a particularly drunk and stodgy Ame General mutter
So one of the reasons your character got promoted was just a complete coincidence? Doesn't seem like any skilled subterfuge or espionage was involved at all, she just happened to be standing nearby a guy who happened to be blabbing Rain Militia secrets. I mean sure yeah why not, but couldn't a genin of done the exact same thing? But whatever.

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Every mercenary man killed in a one sided struggle with Yukiji very little wounds in the brutality and chaos of conflict.
I assume you mean Yukiji suffered few wounds while killing the big bunch of bad guys but this phrasing is weird. Sorry, I can only give you 2 points no juts- oh wait nevermind.

Hey, all the numbers look fine! I'd maybe mention the point you sacrificed for the item point maybe a bit earlier since I was confused where it went until I scrolled down. Anyway half approved.
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I read it as, “she’s been undercover for a year and also sleeping with this guy who let on too much info.” Good work with the bio, I like her even more than I did before.

Half’d. And yeah, it might be good to mention somewhere around Stars that you sacrificed a pool point for weapon points.

EDIT: I just checked the inventory system. You do not have to pay for the Celebes sword, and you can take out the bit about there needing to be one post of concentration.

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To elaborate on Wess's observation, I believe your item is a Cleaver Sword (4) with Morph to Katana (1), Hidden (1) for a total of 6.
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Oh damn, that changed mah stats since I don't got to sacrifice a Power point for my inventory now. Errythang should be good, first two approvals don't count tho since I have 14 power as opposed to 13. Didn't effect jootsu.
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Re-half’d.
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I think last time you got voted for MotM you mentioned someone was in the middle of an Engi Renaissance, but I think this rewrite is a testament to that same sentiment applying to you. It's easy to blur the lines between Buko and the Fist, and here you are with something fresh, interesting, and dangerous! I'm absolutely in love with this character.

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Weekly bump for my OG Powerpuff Girl Princess.
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Approved my little girl's all growed up.
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