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Old 07-16-2017, 07:04 AM   #1
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Default Yen Sero-Snow Jounin



Name: Yen "Frozen Prince" Sero
Age: 25
Sex: Male
Height: 5" 11'

Character Type:Shinobi

Country/Village: Snow - Yukigakure

Rank: Jounin
Division:N/A

Physical Description:
Slick black hair cascades behind the prince. His ocean blue eyes compliment his pale complexion. He has a slightly pointy nose and pinkish lips. The lips are always chapped due to the cold and Sero tends to bite them, which sometimes results in cuts on his lips. He is very skinny and doesn't seem like the type of person that would fight in hand-to-hand combat. Due to his lack of desire and willingness to train his body as well as becoming a refugee and living off the land scavenging Sero's body lack a large deal of muscle and instead he would be considered very skinny. However, because of his low body fat he still has definition but it is most definitely just for show. His legs however, have a larger amount of muscle and help him run long distances and quick speeds to catch animals for food.

Clothing:
Sero wears a green fleece over a black long sleeve shirt. The fleece is fairly thick and provides good insulation and can keep Sero warm from the harsh elements of the Snow Country. A pair of white pants wraps tightly over his lower half of his body and the cuffs of the pants go down all the way to his shoe laces, sometimes covering them. He wears white boots to keep his feet warm, however, they are light enough to not impede on his movement.However, the most unique part of his outfit would be the spiky ice crown that surrounds his head. It is see through and extends about 5 inches above his head and rests close to the top of his ears. However, if need be Sero can dissolve the crown in the face of enemy shinobi or anyone other then a fellow shinobi allowing him to keep his anonymity.

Personality:
Sero's personality is quite unique in the sense that he feels like royalty. This in itself gives him a smug demeanor towards other people but it is also met with an understanding of diplomacy. He is a talker, and a smooth one at that. He believes himself to be a "Prince" and with such he feels like it is his obligation to create a better Snow Village that can be ruled by diplomacy. He will sometimes look down on people because of his false realization of his past but he will also come to understand people's needs and wants. He is the type of guy that wants to make everyone happy as long as it suits his end game. He will attempt to get on a person's good side in the beginning of an interaction and through time his smug personality will rear its ugly head.

Sero works well in groups and is a people person and he attempts to make himself the leader. He has great leadership traits including critical thinking, communication, and delegating. He knows his own weakness and attempts to compensate by creating a cohesive and successful team when he has the opportunity. Sero truly shines as a supportive leader and see his fellow Yuki-nin as a necessary extension of himself.

Nindo; "Way of the Ninja":
All that we are is the result of what we have thought

Clan/Bloodline:
N/A

Primary Archetype: Ninjutsu Specialist
Special: When taken as Primary Archetype, the character receives a free Stage One jutsu from a universal Ninjutsu list.
Primary: Chakra
Secondary: Own Choice
Tertiary: Own Choice
Stat Merit: +2 to Power, +1 to Control
Stat Flaw: -2 to Strength, -1 to Tactics

Secondary Archetype Genjutsu Specialist
Special: When taken as Primary Archetype, the character recieves an extra 1 post added to base duration to one genjutsu technique. This may be used only once a thread.
Primary: Mental
Secondary: Chakra
Tertiary: Physical
Stat Merit: +2 to Willpower, +1 to Intelligence
Stat Flaw: -2 to Strength, -1 to Stamina
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Statistics

Physical Tertiary 40


Strength: 1-2(NS)-2(GS)+10(pool)=7
Speed: 1+15(pool)=16
Stamina: 1-1(GS)+15(pool)=15

Mental Secondary 50

Intelligence: 1+1(GS)+16(pool)=18
Tactics: 1-1(NS)+18(pool)=18
Willpower: 1+2(GS)+16(pool)=19

Chakra Primary 60

Power: 1+2(NS)+20(pool)=23
Control: 1+1(NS)+20(pool)=22
Reserves: 1+20(pool)=21


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Jutsu
Global Ninjutsu
{Archetype Freebie+Jutsu 1-5}

Stage 1
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
Requirements: Power 2, Tactics 2

Stage 2
Kyou Masukingu no Jutsu (Sound Masking Technique)
Requirements: Intelligence 6, Tactics 5, Control 5

Stage 3
Hitoshizeru Bakuhatsu no Jutsu (Hidden Explosion Technique)
Requirements: Power 9, Control 9, Intelligence 7

Stage 4
Shunshin no Jutsu (Instantaneous Body Technique)
Requirements: Power 12, Control 11, Reserves 10, Intelligence 12

Stage 5
Hiritsuku Kasumi no Jutsu (Stinging Mist Technique)
Requirements: Power 17, Control 16, Reserves 16, Intelligence 15

Chidori (Thousand Birds)
Requirements: Intelligence 18, Tactics 17, Willpower 17, Control 14


Kishu no Mokushi (Horsemen of the Apocalypse)
{Jutsu 6-10}

Stage 1
Oujou: Iji (Death: Memories)
Requirements: Power 3, Control 3

Stage 2
Soeki: Hirogari Furei (Plague: Spreading Sickness)
Requirements: Willpower 6, Intelligence 6, Control 4

Stage 3
Kousen: Sono Ken kageboushi (War: The Sword’s Silhouette)
Requirements: Willpower 8, Intelligence 8, Tactics 6

Stage 4
Soeki: Kayui Gaihi (Plague: Itching Skin)
Requirements: Willpower 14, Intelligence 13, Tactics 11, Power 10

Stage 5
Kyoukou: Gaihi soshite Kosshi (Famine: Skin and bones)
Requirements: Control 17, Power 16, Reserves 16, Willpower 15


Hyouton - Ice Release{Jutsu 11-18}
Stage 1
Hyouton: Shogai Ni Hanshite Kanbo (Ice Element: Ward Against Cold)
Requirements: 3 Willpower, 3 Control

Stage 2
Hyouton: Reinigiri (Ice Element: Zero Grip)
Requirements: 6 Reserves, 6 Power, 4 Willpower

Stage 3
Hyouton: Yuki Bunshin (Ice Element: Snow Clone)
Requirements: 8 Reserves, 8 Power, 6 Control

Hyouton: Hitoshirezu Yari (Ice Element: Hidden Spear)
Requirements: 9 Reserves, 9 Power, 7 Willpower

Hyouton: Tsubetai Murasuzume (Freezing Flock)
Requirements: 10 Reserves, 10 Power, 8 Tactics

Stage 4
Hyouton: Ageru Nejiro (Ice Element: Raise Citadel)
Requirements: 15 Reserves, 15 Power, 13 Control, 14 Willpower, Sealing Tags

Stage 5
Hyouton: Yukitama Renda (Ice Element: Snowball Barrage)
Requirements: 19 Reserves, 19 Power, 18 Control, 16 Willpower

Stage 6
Hyouton: Nomu Kyuutai (Ice Element: Engulfing Sphere)
Requirements: 21 Reserves, 20 Power, 19 Control, 17 Willpower, 15 Intelligence


The Den of Spiders - Spider Summoning List

Stage 1 - Relo
Requirements: Control 3, Willpower 2

Stage 2 - Togo
Requirements: Control 6, Power 6, Intelligence 4

Stage 3 - Shibi
Requirements: Control 9, Power 9, Intelligence 7

Stage 4 - Richi
Requirements: Control 14, Power 13, Reserves 11, Tactics 10


Inventory:
shinobi kit
Item Points Remaining:8

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Biography:
The streams of smoke flicker in and out of vision through the torrential snow storm. The hollow screams of men and woman overcome the winds by force. The snow was painted red that day and it was beautiful. Despised by his fellow Yuke-nin Sero grew alone in a cold hut in Kita for the majority of his life. As a young boy Sero was weak and fragile, malnutured and prematurely birthed he barely hung on to life for the first few moments of his life. Growing up with a father that was a fisherman and a mother that worked at home Sero knew no luxuries. Afflicted with poverty Sero grew up being made fun of, teased, and tortured by his peers. Through this Sero learned to be alone, to play in his mind and to grow in a fairy tale. The academy years acted as his awkward high school phase where the common was being preyed upon by the other kids. Despite this he would return everyday home with the sole task to make himself a prince. Imagination went wild in the outskirts of the snow barren land and there Sero continued to build his castle. Told by his father to never give up and pushed by the quote "Your thoughts become things" Sero never grew up. Each day his castle would grow and grow but sure enough the make shift structure would fall to the elements. However, this did not stop Sero and each day he woke up stating the inspirational speech.

The life of Sero as a child is unimportant, much like his peers he graduated from the academy and he continued his shinobi career. As he grew stronger at manipulating the snow his castle grew and grew. He imagined a palace of ice, with butlers serving his every whim. He imagined a friend that would always be there, the kind of friend that would take his own life to sustain his own. As a genin he was still frail and had no strength compared to his fellow peers and because of this he continued to be preyed on. The weak were always the casualties of war and Sero was one of them. Growing up he felt weak, alone, and useless. However, every afternoon he continued to make his palace. Worried for his safety and sanity Sero's parents turned their hope to an old friend; a shinobi popular in the village that was well attuned to the arts of genjutsu and taijutsu. This man would become the friend Sero needed. A calm, collected, and generous man, Nen was the type of savior the parents were looking for. Quickly the two developed an amazing bond that left Sero wishing Nen was his father.

"Whatever the mind can conceive, it can achieve." Nen spoke harmonically to the tentative Sero. It was another life lesson that would provide the will for the young shinobi to flourish. Within the year that the pair had become friends Sero completed the chuunin exams and was one of the top in his class. However, his body was still weak compared to others and despite the intense physical training it seemed a plateau had been reached. Instead of focusing on the bad the pair focused on his strengths. His art of genjutsu and ninjutsu flourished and he was a force to be reckon with. This continued throughout the years as the pair would officially be paired off as a two man cell. They worked wonderfully together and when Sero's father and mother died from old age Nen was the only person he had left. The palace of ice that Sero once created every afternoon had been neglected for some time now and the remnants were now scattered to the snowy winds. A few days before the destruction of Snow Sero had accomplished a mission obtaining a spy for the Hidden Leaf. Besides Nen and Sero the four man group had been killed. Despite his age and relativly weak outer appearance the genjutsu of Sero proved too much for the spy and it was an easy catch that according to Nen was accomplished only by Sero. Realizing this power he was promoted on his return. However, it would be short lived as a small group of mysterious figures laid waste to his village.

The fighting between snow and leaf had been going on for some time and it seemed like it was at its climax as the invasion began. Nen and Sero raced to the center of the village as the vision of death flooded the scenery. The once perfect white snow was bathed in red and bodies laid over the landscape like a small blanket of flesh. The duo tried to do what they could but it was useless this mysterious group of monsters were destroying everything they loved and despite the will to defeat them they were too strong. Man and woman fell to their blades and foreign ninjutsu and genjutsu. There was no hope for Sero at this point and as the two began to sacrifice their lives Nen saved Sero's.

"You have to leave there is no hope for you here, I have seen you grow into an amazing shinobi that is destined to change the world, you cant die here because of your inexperience. Let me handle thiiiiii" His speech was cut short by a blade that nearly cut him in half. Scared for his life and running on the flight or fight response Sero flew away as far as possible. He poofed away in a mound of snow and landed on his knees a distance away. However, the enemy was so quick he had landed a kick on him as he left the area. Leaving Sero in a daze that would quickly turn into unconsciousness as he landed face first into the snow. The sight of the billowing smoke could be seen in the background. A quick turn around would have gave proof that this wasn't all a dream.

Detached from his old personality he regressed to a subdivision of his imagination from his childhood when he remembered building a castle. Because of this he thought of himself as a pseudo prince of Snow. He was aware that the village had been destroyed but he lost memory of how and who he was before hand. Looking at his blood stained hands he slammed them on the ground with tears spewing from his eyes and what arose was a large building made of ice. Its design was eliquate and foreign. Using his imagination he had created his own dream home. As he entered the home through the ice panned doors he was welcomed to a fully furnished ice mansion with beautiful designs of flowers, snowflakes, and miscellaneous shapes to create a perfect combination of decoration. In the middle rested a throne which upon sitting down a ice crown donned his head.

Day in and day out he would extend his mansion into something only the richest of men could dream of and even then they would fall short to his imagination. Hallways that extended for at least half a football field were lavished with statues of animals exotic and local. But this was a lonely state of being and to combat this Sero created clone friends. Though they looked similar to him in some form they were still ice none the less. Sero hated looking at his reflection when he stared into the clones eyes. What should have been his fellow Snow shinobi was a hollow piece of ice with no soul. However, there would come a time when he would be rudely interrupted by a random Leaf shinobi patrol.

Growing bored of the life of royalty Sero decided to leave his home and find out the true extent of the destruction of his home village. He also wanted to find the rest of his kind and he knew there were survivors like him; in his mind there had to be. As Sero left his estate a small earthquake seemed to occur as the mansion began to falter and collapse on itself. Sero had a new mission and it was to unite everyone under his name and become the "Prince" of Snow.


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Old 07-16-2017, 11:43 AM   #2
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There's 8 weapon points remaining, might be worth mentioning.

I don't see any issue with the numbers and if the bio is basically unchanged from the version that got junked the I suppose there's no reason not to Half Approve.
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Old 07-16-2017, 04:54 PM   #3
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Old 07-17-2017, 06:14 PM   #4
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No issue with the numbers here Half Approved. I'll let our excellency the Snow GM decide on the fluffy aspects of the character as the bio seems a little light on why this guy should possess jounin-level powers.
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Old 07-29-2017, 12:19 PM   #5
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Snow GM Approved and Half-Approved. He got promoted for building snow castles and catching a spy. That seems weak. But he had the popular and powerful jounin in town vouch for him personally and we all know politics plays a huge role, so this actually seems not only possible, but likely.

I'm aware I'm not technically Snow GM. I'm claiming it.
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Old 07-29-2017, 01:41 PM   #7
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Math checks out to me. Half-Approved.
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Another character with -En in their name? DISAPPROVED!

Just kidding, taking my half.
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