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![]() "The Colossus" Furude Eri ~3 AP Used at Creation~ Age: 27 Sex: F Height: 5'5" Country/Village: Sand Rank: Jounin Division: [HARI] - Team Sensei Physical Description In what has come to be known as a funny quip, Eri's appearance is a stark contrast from the brutish nature of her nickname. Perhaps it's her shy and reserved attitude, which often give rise to aloof and cute mannerisms. Perhaps it's her eyes; one a beautiful and deep azure, the other a bright and piercing pear. Whatever the case may be, only one word truly sums up Furude Eri. Adorable. Long blonde hair flows gently down, neatly framing her soft face. A slight blush adorns her always rosy cheeks, giving a hint of color to an otherwise pale complexion. Her eyes; though already mentioned they certainly bear repeating, as many identify them as Eri's most distinct and beautiful feature. Her right eye is as blue as a clear summer sky, a truly gentle and soft color. Her left, in contrast, is a sharp and piercing green, reminiscent of sharp blades of grass. The juxtaposition of these two magnificent colors creates a truly dazzling image, one many get lost in upon meeting the woman whether for the first or hundredth time. Her style is fairly plain, as she often seen wearing a simple, black track jacket which adheres nicely to her slender figure. In the heat of the desert, she is usually found with it roughly half unzipped, sporting usually nothing more than a white tube top underneath. She also generally wears a longer length tennis skirt, which sits roughly halfway up her leg from her knee. Necessity generally trumps style in her line of work, but Eri has found a nice compromise, in her eyes at least, between comfort and chic. Her outfit is completed by her Hitai-ate tied neatly around her neck, proudly displaying the emblem of her country for all to see. Personality Truthfully, in order to accurately describe Furude Eri, one would have to draw the comparison to a coin. A single object with two very distinct faces. On one face is the Eri that most know and recognize as her true self. In social settings she tends to be timid and almost painfully shy. In fact, one could go an entire outing without hearing Eri voice her opinions at all. Countless times she has found herself opening her mouth to speak, but finding no words to articulate. Still, despite the awkward silences that tend to follow her wherever she may go, Eri greatly enjoys the company of others; due in no small part to her magnanimous and benevolent attitude. Loyal and generous to a fault, Eri truly has many great qualities that define the jounin as one of the more empathetic and caring citizens of Sunagakure. Perhaps Eri's greatest quality, if one were to qualify them, would be that she is incredibly maternal; she possesses a deep love and appreciation for any and all who fall under her care. Among her peers, she is undoubtedly the "Mom of the group"; always making sure to take every precaution to ensure that her friends and companions are always happy, safe, and prosperous. Truly, Eri's greatest pleasure in life is watching one of her peers or her students achieve the success they had been longing and working for. She is constantly encouraging others, and though her timid personality may not show it, is always ready to give advice and be there for others when needed. She is also extremely protective of those she holds dear, often times being the first to jump to the aid or defense of those she cares about, even sometimes if it means protecting them from themselves. Often, when her comrades may let their inhibitions go and engage in more...hedonistic activities, Eri can be seen somewhere close by, monitoring the situation with a frustrated scowl. However, make no mistake, if her friends are later unable to take care of themselves, Eri will be right there to make sure they arrive at home safe and sound. Truly, the rare nights where Eri herself engages in these acts are frightening, though exhilirating ones indeed. All in all, Eri possesses a magnificent heart, and it's obvious why many tend to view her as one of their most loyal companions. On the flip side of the coin, however... As is the case with many, when what she loves comes under fire Eri's personality tends to shift. What is not particularly common about Eri, however, is the intensity and degree of this shift. In fact, referring to it as a 'shift' is a heinous understatement; a different entity entirely seems to take hold over Eri, and this entity was most certainly not born from the same mold as she. Gone is her calm and timid disposition, replaced instead with a fiery rage that can not and will not be quelled until the focus of her wrath is obliterated. Particularly, when her students' safety is at stake, the Eri that appears is almost demonic in nature. Like a mother grizzly protecting her cubs, she abandons any form of restraint and focuses entirely on eradicating the danger before her, all for the sake of her young. Few have seen this side of Eri, but those that have are sure to never forget this tempest of fury. Archetype: Sentinel Combo Special: Once per thread, the Sentinel may block against a technique one stage higher than indicated by their defensive technique. This does not boost Stage Six techniques to be able to block Stage Seven. Archetype Merits: +2 Power, +2 Intelligence, +1 Control, +1 Tactics Archetype Flaws: -3 Strength, -1 Stamina, -1 Power, -1 Tactics ----------------------------------- Statistics Sentinel - S Reflect All Force - RAF Physical (Secondary - 50) Strength: 1 -3(S) +17 +5(TP)=20 +10(RAF) Speed: 1 +13 =14 +10(RAF) Stamina: 1 -1(S) +20 +2(TP) =22 +25(RAF) Mental (Tertiary - 40) Intelligence: 1 +2(S) +13 +1[AP]=17 Tactics: 1 +13 =14 Willpower: 1 +14 =15 Chakra (Primary - 58) Sacrificing 2 Stat Points for 4 WP Power: 1 +1(S) +19 =21 Control: 1 +1(S) +18 +1(TP*)=21 Reserves: 1 +21 =22 -------------------------------------------------- Jutsu and Techniques: Reflect All Force Stages 1-5 (F1-4) Requirements: 22 Stamina, 20 Strength, 14 Speed, 14 Tactics, 2 Intelligence Cumulative Bonuses: +10 Strength, +10 Speed, +25 Stamina Special Techniques: [F5] Name: Chakra Coating Shield Technique Requirements: Power 10, Control 10, Reserves 8 [F6] Name: Chakra Edge Requirements: Power 15, Control 15, Reserves 13 Glass Ninjutsu Stage 1 [F7] Name: Hari Seisakusho (Glass Works) Requirements: Power 2, Willpower 2 Stage 2 [F8] Name: Giragira Tekidan (Glare Grenade) Requirements: Intelligence 6, Willpower 5, Control 5 Stage 3 [F9] Name: Hari no Yoroi - Karui (Armour of Glass - Minor) Requirements: Power 8, Control 8, Reserves 6 Stage 4 [F10] Name: Hari Shunshin (Glass Instantaneous Body) Requirements: Power 12, Control 11, Reserves 10, Intelligence 12 [F11] Name: Hari no Yoroi - Juuyou (Armour of Glass - Major) Requirements: Power 14, Control 13, Reserves 11, Willpower 10 [TP] Kyuuten no Ikari (Anger of the Heavens) Requirements: Power 15, Control 15, Reserves 13, Intelligence 14 Stage 5 [F12] Name: Koukiaru Kabe (Shine Wall) Requirements: Power 17, Control 17, Reserves 16, Intelligence 15 [TP] Name: Hari Midika (Glass Familiar) Requirements: Power 18, Control 17, Reserves 17 Willpower 14 Stage 6 [TP] Name: Aegis of the Colossus Replacing: Mure no Kyouran (Fury of the Swarm) Requirements: Power 21, Control 20, Reserves 19, Intelligence 17, Willpower 15 Sand Ninjutsu Stage 1 [F13] Name: Suna Kojinmari (Sand Compaction) Requirements: Power 3, Tactics 2 [F14] Name: Tsuchi no Kaishin (Conversion of Earth) Requirements: Power 4, Control 4 Stage 2 [F15] Name: Suna Same (Sand Shark) Requirements: Intelligence 6, Willpower 5, Control 5 Stage 3 [F16] Name: Suna Kyuutai (Sand Sphere) Requirements: Power 8, Control 8, Reserves 6 [F17] Name: Suna Kawarimi (Sand Replacement) Requirements: Intelligence 9, Willpower 9, Control 7 Stage 4 [F18] Name: Suna no Guuzou (Idol of Sand) Requirements: Intelligence 14, Willpower 13, Tactics 11, Control 10 Stage 5 [AP] Name: Suna Ryuu (Sand Dragon) Requirements: Power 17, Control 16, Reserves 16, Intelligence 15 Stage 6 [AP] Name: Shadow of the Colossus Replacing: Kyoubou Suna Arashi (Raging Sandstorm) Requirements: Power 21, Control 20, Reserves 19, Intelligence 17, Willpower 15 --------------------------------- Inventory - 12WP: Unique Shield - Left Arm of the Colossus - 12 A truly wicked shield of Eri's own design, this shield was created in order to not only offer substantial protection, but also enable Eri to engage in many offensive tactics as well. The shield has a number of weapons built into it, including a large spike in the front, metallic claws that can pierce or rend flesh, as well as a hidden launcher which spews forth a barrage poisoned needles. A portion of it is also hollow and is normally filled with sand to act as a catalyst for many of Eri's techniques. The shield itself generally remains attached to the limb armor in one set piece, however, it can be detached to allow Eri to hurl the shield at a distance. - Shield (3) - Combined - Gourd (0) - Combined - Tanto (1) - Combined - Small Ballistics/Needle Launcher (1) - Needles coated in Hallucinogenic Poison (2) - Combined - Hand Weapon (2) - Combined - Limb Armor (1) - Returning [the shield portion] - (2) Shinobi Kit - 0 ----------------------------------------- I Quote:
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- Sacrificed 2 Stat Points for 4 WP - 3 AP used - +1 INT - Suna Ryu - Sand Stage 6 Swap Thread Ratings: [Spartoi] The Language of Flowers: +Hari Midika (Glass Familiar) Boogy Nights: +1 Strength, Kyuuten no Ikari (Anger of the Heavens), +1 strength[MotM] A Capful of Wind - +3 Strength, [MotM: Aegis of the Colossus] Steady as the Wind Blows - +2 Stamina, Stage Five Reflect All Force [MoTM: +1 Control*]
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I like her! Tough broads ftw! Half'd
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Edited her a bit, added a couple of AP, let's start over.
Obviously swaps are placeholders for now until they're rated/approved.
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Lollll you updated this right after I finished reading it the first time. Stats check out, good work on the bio. I'd like to see a little bit more on Sand events; you covered the Jailbreak and academy gassings, but there's scarce mentioning of the previous arc. Add that in and you can have my half.
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Stats seem right to me. What part of the giant arm shield thing does the 'returning'? The needles? The shield, if thrown? The whole thing? I don't think it makes a difference in the pricing at all but it might be good to include that somewhere.
Half approved.
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I've got to commend you on the format of the interview, backwards story telling was definitely a smart way to frame the biography. I agree with Wess though, as a Jounin, I think there should be more mention of the current arc and her feelings toward the Priests and their end (seeing how she'd spend most of her shinobi career battling against them and such).
Add those details in and I'll return to approve boss.
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Aight. Added a section about the beginning of the priest war, as well as a quick blurb about her feelings towards the end of that war in part II.
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Word, works for me. Sand Primary GM Approval. I think you just need another half and this character should be good to go.
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Half-approved
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think I'm actually missing .5 and her swaps actually. I edited her after Buko's half.
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