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Old 01-15-2016, 04:02 PM   #1
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[Name]
Len Sosu
[Age]
16
[Sex]
Male

[Height]
5"2"
[Country/Village]
Kaze no kuni/Sunagakure no Sato

[Rank]
Chuunin
[Division]
Kaze-Investigator
[Clan]
N/A

[Nindo; “Way of the Ninja”]
No one can put me down

[Physical/Clothing Description]
Sosu always has a smile, whether it is because he feels confident, is about to lose, or is just talking to someone, or walking down the street you will see a smile on Sosu's face. Always having an erect and strong posture, the young boy walks around like he has a mission. Never lax looking even when relaxing he has a certain demeanor to himself that is projected well. A large x-shaped scar lines his face which you could consider his only lacking but very revealing feature. Never truly healing like it should have it gives Sosu a reminder that there is always someone better out there then him. Though having a large mass of hair Sosu is able to keep it well kept and proper. Never going farther then his eyebrow it is quite a sight to see. He is a lean and well defined young boy and there doesn't seem to be an ounce of fat on him. Constant nights of grueling training have made him this way. His Mark of the Keeper tattoo is that of a swirling typhoon located on his left thigh.

Just like his composure his garb is also very well kept. The mix of auburn and black make for a hell of a combination. Wrapping around his body tightly his auburn t-shirt hugs against his muscle. No design is visible and seems to be exclusively that color. He enjoys wearing some type of coat that is black to cover up the rest of his body during lax times. However, once a fight begins he will shed his black overcoat to reveal his auburn color t-shirt. The shirt itself ends mid way through his bicep and makes for a great addition to his physique. Sosu prefers black shinobi pants that are lined with numerous pockets to hold tools that he would essentially need. They reach all the way down to his black colored shinobi sandals and they rest comfortably right above his ankles.

[Personality]
Sosu is a proud type of boy with every desire to be the best. No matter what adversity he will come up against he has it in his mind that he can beat them. He sees himself as a weaker version of everyone else and is always training. He deep down blames himself for his mother’s death even though there was nothing he could have done. He is also afraid to end up like his father. Crippled and broken is the type of man he fears the most and he doesn’t want anything to get in his way. He despises people with the birthrite of a clan. He does respect them but feels like they are all the same but with a chip on their shoulder. This stems from his jealousy of wishing it was his father that was so well known like Renchishin Hitoko.

He is a very jealous boy and with the recent death of his mother he feels like he is alone in the world. He begs for attention and comes off as a cocky young child but deep down all he really wants is to be accepted and become a powerful shinobi of Sand. He doesn’t take anything lightly and will work to his full capacity on anything. He is also very obedient and precise. He will always listen to command and never second-guess a commanding officer. It is only when he is set off that he will tone things out.

He is also the type of kid that will go into a fight without thinking. The mentality he has will one day catch up to him but he thinks himself as a specimen of perfection when it comes to physical prowess. There is no one in his mind that can beat him and he has a mission to prove it. Countless hours are spent in the training yard; there is no rest for Sosu and despite the amount of time in the training ground he is considerably smart. He knows how to fight and he knows the way a battle works. He sees his fists as powerful tools; more so then the ninjutsu that most shinobi have.

[Combo Archetype] Juggernaut
Archetypes: Taijutsu Specialist – Human Tank
Combo Special: The player can resist physical damage from all sources of damage for 2 posts. The Juggernaut has to remain in motion during this period of time and cannot use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. As soon as the Juggernaut comes to a halt, the effect ends, even if the Juggernaut is technically allowed to keep moving for more posts. This can only be used once per thread.


[Statistics]

Physical Primary 30

Strength: 1+1{TS}+2{HT}+6{pool}+7{AP} +5[Thread]=22+25{FGF}=47
Speed: 1+1{TS}-2{HT}+15{pool}+3{AP}+6[Thread]=24+25{VF}=49
Stamina: 1+1{TS}+1{HT}+9{pool}+6{AP}+7[Thread]=25+20{FGF}=45

Mental Tertiary 24

Intelligence: 1+8{pool}=9
Tactics: 1+8{pool}=9
Willpower: 1+8{pool}+7[Thread]=16

Chakra Secondary 27

Power: 1-1{TS}+7{pool}=7
Control: 1-1{HT}+14{pool}+2{AP}=16
Reserves: 1-2{TS}+6{pool}=5

[Jutsu & Techniques]
Vortex Fist
Stage Five{Jutsu 1-4}
Stat Requirements: Speed 20, Strength 17, Stamina 19, Control 16
Stage Bonuses: +4 Strength, +5 Speed
Special Techniques{Jutsu 5-6}
Kuuhaku Douryou Atemi [Null Momentum Strike]
Shunkoku Kyoten Teiryuu [Instant Point Stop]
Douryou Shousan [Momentum Dispersion]
Gekizou Heikouidou [Sudden Increase Shift]

Fierce God Fist
Stage Five {Jutsu 7-9/1AP}
Stat Requirements: Strength 20, Stamina 20, Speed 16, Willpower 16
Stage Bonuses: +5 Strength, +4 Stamina
Regular Techniques:
Name: Karada Buki (Body Weapon)
Special Techniques:{Jutsu 10-11}
Name: Kishin Ago (Fierce God Jaw)
Requirement: Strength 8, Stamina 8, Speed 6
Name: Kishin Sentou (Fierce God Punch)
Requirements: Willpower 8, Tactics 6, Intelligence 8

Decaying Fist
Stage 4:
Requirement: Stamina 21, Strength 18, Willpower 14, Speed 3
Stage Bonus:+5 Strength,+4 Stamina

Global Ninjutsu
Stage 1 {AP 3}
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
Requirements: Power 2, Tactics 2

Stage 2
Chakra Kami Nawa (Chakra Hair Rope)
Requirements: Intelligence 5, Tactics 4, Willpower 4

Kyokugi-Ken (Sword of Acrobatic Feats)
Stage 5
Requirements: Strength: 19 Speed: 19 Stamina: 18 Willpower 16
Stat Bonus: +3 Strength, +3 Speed, +3 Stamina
Regular Technique:
Javelin Thrust
Over And Under
Spin Fury
Top Spin
Shockwave

Sand Ninutsu
Stage 1
Name: Suna Bunshin (Sand Clone){AP 7}
Requirements: Power 2, Willpower 2

Stage 2
Name: Suna Same (Sand Shark)
Requirements: Intelligence 6, Willpower 5, Control 5

Stage 3
Name: Suna Shigure (Sand Shower)
Requirements: Intelligence 8, Willpower 6, Tactics 8

Universal Dog Summoning Contract
(AP) Stage 1 - Kuchiyose no Taro
Requirements: Strength 3, Reserves 2
(AP) Stage 2- Kuchiyose no Jiro
Requirements: Strength 6, Speed 6, Power 4
(AP) Stage 3 - Kuchiyose no Momo
Requirements: Strength 9, Speed 9, Power 7
(AP) Stage 4 - Kuchiyose no Kiku
Requirements: Strength 14, Speed 13, Stamina 11, Control 10
(AP) Stage 5 - Kuchiyose no Daiki
Requirements: Strength 18, Speed 17, Stamina 17, Control 14

[Inventory]
Shinobi Kit
Katana [3]
*Returning [2]

Initial Weapon Points: 8
Weapon Points Purchased: 0
Weapon Points Used: 5
Remaining Weapon Points: 4

[Biography]
Quote:
Originally Posted by Bureaucracy of Kaze no Kuni

Can you please state your name for the record?

Sure Sosu, Len Sosu if you want to get technical.

From what I am reading from your reports, you are very obedient to directions. Is this true?

Yes Sir, I love to fall in line and I am always there for my superior officers in the dace of danger. I am here for Sunagakure and the Lord Kazekage always.

Good, good, so tell me a little about your self Sosu-chan.

Well sir, I was born in Gion Village not more than sixteen years ago to a loving mother and father that dedicated their lives to the same life I am living now.

Yes, your father is quite the shinobi; it is tragic what had happened to him indeed.

Yes, it really is but that is alright. I am okay with it now and I accept the fact that he lost his life for the cause of the Village. I just wish that the Sasori Ryodan were extinguished before our loyal comrades had to go into those tunnels.

Well, do you feel any type of disgust for the Sasori Ryodan or the Suna no Soushoku?

I hate them both for what they have done. The Sasori Ryodan might have helped Sunagkaure in the past but they were traitors and deserved the fate they received. Secondly, the Suna no Soushoku desere no mercy and I am glad I was there when their apostle was defeated in the middle of the Village by Lord Kazekage Enzan. I just wish my father got the recognition that Renchinshin was getting. Sometime I really hate those individuals with their birthright.

Birthright? You mean individuals born from a clan?

Yes, I hate some of those guys so much! They walk around like they own the place and that they are the best thing since the creation of Sunagkaure. Well, I got a bone or two to pick with them and I will win!

I sense a lot of hatred towards those brothers that were given something they were never asked for.

Neither was my father! My father was a great man and despite his skill he still felt short to Renchinshin Hitoko. I grew up thinking no one was stronger than my father and as I grew up I noticed Hitoko-san. His prowess is something I have never seen before but I want to be like him.

You know it was the whole village that defeated Minoru, not just Hitoko and not just Lord Juuidaime Kaszekage Enzan.

I guess you are right. I guess I went a little overboard on such a thing. Still; out of this new class of chuunnin I want to rise to the top!

Well, tell me Sosu-chan, what makes you feel like you even deserve the induction into something that only a few amount of people know about? Why do you stand out among the rest?

I dont lack a single thing and I will prove it. I know how battle works, I know how to sneak undetected and I know respect. I love this Village and its people and I know I can help more so then I am being allowed!

But, the life of a shinobi is not always fair, you should realize that the most. So tell me, who did you vote for in the Kazekage vote last year?

Of course I voted for Lord Enzan. I like his drive and he has amazing skill that would out surpass everyone and he has no birthright as well.

So, just because he was cool you voted for him?

No, I voted for him because he is strong and grew up strong with the will to be the best. I chose him because of that. I also chose to enroll in the KAZE division once he abolished the Council of Sand. I really wanted to discover more about the priests that ruined my father’s dreams.

So, you are the investigative kind of guy?

Well, I mean, I like to unravel mysterious but I also love to punch it down in the face if it need be.

So you say you hate everyone with a birthright, how do you feel about the Mujina and their recent unfortunate event?

Well, I may hate, but I would never condone the death of innocence. That is where I would draw the line. No man, woman, or child deserves an execution and the Sasori Ryodan are awful individuals from a time long past that deserve nothing but being destroyed.

Good, I am glad you are at least not as blood thirsty as you make yourself out to be. You know, we are all brothers in this fight against the desert and we need all the help we can get.

I understand, but have you never hated a sibling at least a little; maybe a cousin you were jealous of them or something like that?

Of course, jealousy makes you stronger, maybe you are confusing jealousy for hate.

I will never be jealous of anyone. I will work my ass off to be the best and it will happen.

Where were you when the Jailbreak happened a few months ago?

I was out on the front lines trying to obtain anyone I could from the prison that had escaped. I remember very vividly how a specific hazardous fight went. I was there face to face with a mountain of a man. He seemed to have more power within his own pinky then I had in my whole body but he was slow. Slow enough that I was able to punch and chip him down. I not only used my speed but I used my smarts to crumble that man.

So how many individuals were you able to apprehend?

”Three, one was the mountain of a man that I had spoken about, another was a young kid that thought he was handy with a sword and another was a woman that liked to use sand as a weapon.

Tell me about those two.

Well the one with the sword was easy enough to take down since I had trained my hands to disarm a blade from any man. Once I had his weapon halfway across to street he held no chance to me. The third woman was a little more difficult. To be honest I was almost defeated while being buried in a sand hole she created. However, once I picked up momentum I was able to blast through a sand dragon she had created and with a stunned look on her face I broke her jaw. She must have flew nearly ten feet before slamming her head on a wall.

So you really think your fists can do enough?

Yes, some people are able to raise large dunes of sand, others able to create glass constructs but I will punch and shatter everything that comes against me. That is what I want for myself.

Tell me about your genin years; how were they?

They were fine, I was a part of a very strong team and despite the fact I had a Mujina and a Kabane I still pulled my weight.

Would you say they took most of the fame from you?

Yes, they took a lot of it and I was definitely an underdog during my times with them but I still did as much and accomplished as much as them.

Did you attend your Mujina teammates wake?

Yes, I was there. It was sad like I said but like I stated earlier I never condone unneeded death.

Please tell me about your Chuunin Exam.

Well, for one thing I will admit I wouldn’t have made it as far as I did without the help of my team. Of course I was the strongest of the bunch but they helped put me on the top bracket at the end of the Exams.

What did your Chuunin Exams consist of?

The first exam was a fairly simple one that involved creating a plan to steal a scroll from a highly secure office space. The second Exam was the use of teamwork in a setting outside in the elements. Each team was given a target to hunt. If they hunted the correct target and won they moved on. Finally, the last exam was about combat.

You three made it that far?

No, we did not. It was because of our lack of teamwork that we fell short to some of the other teams. It really upset me at that moment and I hated everything about my teammates. Of course it died down as the days passed after the exams but for the time I was very upset. I was in a real bad place and I wanted to do anything to fix it.

What do you mean a bad place?

Well, after the Exams I decided that being a genin still meant I had to now prove through missions to become a chuunin. Because of this I went on missions others would deem deadly for a genin. Even if my own teammates wouldn’t go; I would make it my mission to find someone that would. I always did and it was almost euphoric. I relished in the death of a rogue shinobi or the success of obtaining some type of new information. I knew that each time I came back alive with what the Village wanted I grew one step closer to where I needed to be next.

I see there are many missions you had gone on. Some to the Fringe, some to attack the Suna no Soushoku and I see here you were a part of the raid that actually defeated the Priests for good. I must say that for your age, that is impressive. However, tell me about your deadliest mission?

I was with two other Chuunin and a Jounin leader. At this point I had grown physically strong enough to stand with either of those other Chuunin. We were to be sent to the Hazy Mountains where there had been reports of missing village folk. We were only meant to scout but as we stayed we grew aware of another presence.

You fought one of the priests?

Yes, only that Jounin and I lived as well. The first of the Chuunin was easily dispensed of as a flurry of projectiles launched onto our campfire. With a moment this skinny but overwhelming man began to show himself within the fires light. There was not much to the fight but I knew that we were in for a fight. The other Chuunin acted as support as me and the Jounin began to spar with the priest. His cane moved like a snake and it wrapped around our Jounin leader. Luckily, I was able to land a hit that allowed his grip to weaken but it had already broken a few ribs. Then without a sense of any awareness the ground ate the supporting Chuunin. There I was alone with a broken Jounin and a very calm priest. I tried and I tried but I began to be cut down farther and farther.

So how did you get out of such a thing?

The Jounin I was with was able to overcome his injuries and as my body was being used as a punching bag he was side swiped by a sword slash from the side. I took that opportunity to reach into that wound and grab anything I could and rip it out.

That is brutal. I kind of like that. However, what can you do for this new coming of Sunagakure?

I have seen what hides under the sands, I have seen death, I have seen despair. I have seen what I can do and it scares me but it should scare our enemies more. I have gone on countless suicide missions to the deepest and darkest parts of the fringe. Conquered monstrous snakes within the sands and even helped kill a Priest that threatened the well-being of our home. If there is anyone that deserves to become one of these ranks it is me.

We shall see how long you survive
Other Info:
Taijutsu savant breaker
AP Breaker

Missions
2/19/16 Growing Pains:Vortex Fist +1 Stamina, +1AP Kuuhaku Douryou Atemi [Null Momentum Strike]
3/22/17 Rising Sun +2 Speed
3/23/17 16 AP Used: +1 Speed, +5 Strength, +4 Stamina, +2 Control, Stage 5 Vortex Fist, Chakra Hair Rope, Sand Shark, Sand Shower
5/27/17 Where There Is A Will There Is A Way +1 Willpower, AP: Gekizou Heikouidou
6/10/17 Colossus in the Shade +2 Willpower, +1 Speed[MotM]
6/13/17 Every Dog has his Day +1 Strength, +1 Speed[MotM]
6/13/17 AP Usage: 5 AP Used for Stages 1-5 of the Dog Contract
6/30/17 Gate Edits: 3 gates removed, three stages of Sword of Acrobatic Feats added.
07/16/17 - Lullabies of Death + 2 Willpower
07/16/17 - AP Expenditure 2 Spent - S4 Kyokugi-Ken, S4 Sa Kishin Kobushi
07/23/17 - Moonlight Moontone +2 Strength, +1 Speed [MotM]
07/23/17 - Twilight Assassins +2 Willpower, +1 Speed [MotM]
07/30/17 - Man v. Herself +2 Stamina, Decaying Fist Stage 4 [MotM]
08/10/17—The Rising Sun (Pt. 2) +2 Strength, +1MotM Stage 5 Fierce God Fist
08/31/17 - Sand Mirage +2 Stamina
08/31/17 - Confronting the Furious Five: Now Four +2 Stamina

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Old 01-15-2016, 04:13 PM   #2
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Unless this is an AP breaker, no more than 3 AP may be spent on jutsu.
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fixed that up for you. Thought it was different; sorry
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Old 01-16-2016, 03:47 AM   #4
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Physical primary only has 1 points per stage for the first 2 lists. Decaying Fist costs 2 points per stage, so you don't have enough jutsu to take it.

I'll leave it to our glorious Sand GM overlord to determine if the bio is good enough, my only issue with it would be him killing 3 priests since if my memory serves me right the priests were jounin level or above and your character is apparently a genin for most of the bio.
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Old 01-16-2016, 06:57 AM   #5
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So this guy will be taking the Tai savant special that I bought so it means I only spend 1 point no matter what on taijutsu stages. {Highlighted that in Other Information}

Your right Junge, you were around during when all these threads were happening so I trust your memory. I took out the part where I beat up three Jounin myself and replaced it with a chuunin exam segment. Left mostly everything else the same.

Interviews got me stressing :P
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Old 01-16-2016, 04:02 PM   #6
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Oh, how did I miss that? Silly donation awards making all these character sheets so hard to check.

My only remaining comment is I'm not sure how character created Yagyou work. Normal Yagyou have a nickname and an alternate ego but I'm unsure if Hitoko wants you to RP that happening or if it's supposed to be in the biography somewhere. Again that's mostly a Hitoko question so you might want to contact him and see what he wants in that regard. Half Approved.
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Add your nickname/alter ego to the character sheet. It wouldn't be a Yagyou character without it.
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alright, I think I did what you asked for. If anything just tell me to add more things.
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I honestly don't see a reason why this guy was promoted to Chuunin much less selected for Yagyou. Can you please give me more reasons for both of those.
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added more to the Jailbreak, more to the chuunin exams, more to a couple missions that he had gone on. I also added just a little more fluff to the bio. I am just not sure what else I can add except adding more fluff missions. Also added a run in with a priest
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