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Old 04-25-2011, 05:01 AM   #1
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Default [Leaf Chuunin]Hanarabi Takeo

Hanarabi Takeo
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5'11”

Konohagakure – Chuunin
Hada

Physical Description:
Fiery red hair tops the head of Hanarabi Takeo which seem to contrast his greyish eyes to a certain extent. Of course that’s looking past the man’s imposing height. His body size isn’t as intimidating but it would also prove foolish to take him for granted. Along cream colored skin rest tattoos on the inside of each forearm, one saying ‘Protect’ while the other says ‘Destroy’. That skin seems to be free from abrasion or scars, but one would have to look closer to find the burn marks along his biceps and fingers, that’s if he would allow that person to.

Clothing:
Simplicity is the way that Takeo would prefer to keep it. At all times though, the man can be seen wearing black and yellow gloves over his hands. For the most part, he’d be seen walking around in a white tank top and black pants that fit comfortably around his waist and legs. On occasion there could be an over shirt to cover up a bit more, and if that was the case, the shirt would be more earthly tones. His hitai-ite is worn loosely around the neck area and if that wasn’t part of the outfit for the day a black and yellow bandana would take its place.

Personality:
The man could be summed up easily as hot headed which suits him with his red hair. Takeo has a short fuse and a quick fist. He is also not afraid to bully those deemed weaker than he is, of course that weakness is in his own perception. Now while this has gotten the Chuunin in trouble more times than one could count, it has also proven to come in handy once and a while. Of course, not all are treated the same by the man, as those lucky enough to get close to him have seen a softer side to him, a side that pushes him to protect those even at the cost of his own life.

But get on the wrong side of Takeo and he will show no bounds and no mercy. His aggression causes him to go all out, throwing himself out there to get his point across, by any means necessary.

Nindo; "Way of the Ninja": ‘You going to man up?’

Elemental Suicidialist
Elemental Specialist – Daredevil
The user can seal up to three wounds using their element of choice. Fire and lightning would cauterize, water and sand would simply cover to prevent further damage, wood would also cover the wound(user's movement unhindered.) This doesn't require an action on the user's part. This sealing up does not heal the wound but acts as a temporary bandage until the user can get medical assistance.
Primary: Chakra
Secondary: Own Choice
Tertiary: Own Choice
[Stat Merit: +2 in Power, +1 in Reserves, +2 to Stamina, +1 to Willpower
Stat Flaw: -4 in Tactics, -1 in Strength, -1 to Intelligence]

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Statistics

Physical 27

Strength: 1-[1] +10+|2|=12+6
Speed: 1 +2 +12=15+15
Stamina: 1+[2] +5+|2|=10+6

Mental 24

Intelligence: 1-[1]+14+|4|=18
Tactics: 1-[4] +8+|12|=17
Willpower: 1+[1]+2+|11|=15

Chakra 30

Power: 1+[2] +11+{1}+|9|=24
Control: 1+11+{3}+|8|=23
Reserves: 1+[1]+8+{3}+|9|=22

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Jutsus and Techniques:

Ryuujin-Fu
Stage Three
Stage Requirements: 10 Speed, 10 Strength, 8 Control
Special Technique requirements: Control 7, Power 7, Reserves 6
Stage Bonuses: +15 Speed, +6 Stamina, +6 Strength
Special Techniques
Tenka[S1]
Hanabi[S3]

Danbira no Kyo
Stage One

Global Ninjutsu
Stage One
Kawarimi No Jutsu - Power 2, Tactics 2
Stage Two
Kinobori/Kabenobori no Jutsu - Power 5, Control 4, Reserves 4
Stage Three
Hitoshizeru Bakuhatsu no Jutsu - Power 9, Control 9, Intelligence 7
Stage Four
Tessayose no Jutsu - Power 14, Control 13, Reserves 11, Tactics 10
Shunshin no Jutsu - Power 12, Control 11, Reserves 10, Intelligence 12
Stage Five
Kasai no Uzu [Replacing Hiritsuku Kasumi no Jutsu] - Power 17, Control 16, Reserves 16, Intelligence 15
Stage Six
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Power 21, Control 20, Reserves 19, Intelligence 17, Tactics 15

Katon
Stage One
Katon: Ichi - Power 4, Control 4
Katon: Tanebi no Jutsu - Intelligence 3, Reserves 3
Stage Two
Katon: Ni - Power 7, Control 7, Intelligence 6
Katon: Bounetsu no Jutsu - Intelligence 6, Tactics 5, Control 5
Stage Three
Katon: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Power 8, Control 8, Reserves 6
Katon: San - Power 9, Control 9, Intelligence 7
Katon: Kyuuka no Jutsu - Power 10, Control 10, Willpower 8
Stage Four
Katon: Shi - Power 15, Control 15, Reserves 13, Intelligence 14
Katon: Nenshou Tosshin - Katon: Kyuuka no Jutsu; Power 12, Control 11, Reserves 10, Intelligence 12
Katon: Myaku Hitofuki no Jutsu - Intelligence 12, Tactics 11, Willpower 11, Power 12
Katon: Taika no Jutsu - Bounetsu no Jutsu; Intelligence 14, Tactics 13, Willpower 11, Control 10
Stage Five
Katon Hidora no Jutsu - Power 17, Control 16, Reserves 16, Intelligence 15
Katon: Go - Katon: Shi; Power 19, Control 19, Reserves 18, Intelligence 16
Stage Six
Katon Yurika no Jutsu - Power 21, Control 20, Reserves 19, Intelligence 17, Tactics 15

Minor Contracts: House of Swarms
Stage One
Swarms: Cicada Call: Power 3, Willpower 2
Stage Two
Swarms: Stinging Cloud: Power 6, Control 6, Intelligence 4
Stage Three
Swarms: Natural Armor: Power 9, Control 9, Intelligence 7
Stage Four
Swarms: Teeming Industry: Power 14, Control 13, Reserves 11, Tactics 10
Stage Five
Swarms: Blade Dance: Power 18, Control 17, Reserves 17, Tactics 14
Stage Six
Swarms: Hidden Centipede Hands : Power 23, Control 23, Reserves 22, Tactics 16, Willpower 15

Inventory:
Shinobi Kit
Nodachi - 4
- Elemental Weapon (Fire) x2 - 2
- Returning - 2

Weapon Points Remaining: 0
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Biography:

My childhood was anything but pleasant. It’s not like my life was in mortal peril but try being the youngest of five boys. It was like it was a part of my brother’s lives to make my own a living hell. Day in and day out they’d fuck with me, torment me while mom and dad did nothing for me. I say nothing, but they did put a roof over my head and food on the table, so I guess that’s better than absolutely nothing. But you grow up like that and see how that affects you. Let’s just say I had a lot of pent up rage and anger that at the time had no vent point.

Parent’s sent me off to the academy, said something about a temper and being a shinobi. I don’t know, just went with it. Ah, the academy. Finally an outlet for everything that had happened to me at home. Oh the torment I applied to the weaker kids, oh the fun it was. Maybe that’s why my brothers did it to me. There I met quite a few people, none of them really leaving any lasting impressions, save for two people, Seiteki Ama and Kuzunoha Kana. Yeah, two females were the most influential people in my life at the moment, both for different reasons. Ama was a manipulator, she knew what she wanted and she knew how to get it. Kana on the other hand was nothing more than a buzzing fly, but a fly that was smart enough to stay out of a swat’s reach. I suppose though, Ama was the closest person to me with Kana just tagging along. But Seiteki, the only one to actually penetrate my tough exterior. I know I’m being manipulated, but part of any person just wants someone to be able to turn to at the end of the day and there she was, always there.

Those two and myself all graduated together from the academy and placed on a team together. Our sensei was some douche that almost had a hotter temper than I did. The man really didn’t matter too much to me though as I went on picking on and bullying Kana who just took it while Ama stopped me. The circle was a vicious one, Ama often bit back at me a few times, with a few different meanings if you catch my drift. After all, she no longer lives with her family all thanks to some elaborate scheme thought up by her which I enjoyed.

The Chuunin exams came and went. We didn’t get promoted, we didn’t even place thanks to Ama’s need to flirt with almost every male she sees, except our Jounin sensei who apparently had a sight issue, didn’t know how to avert his eyes. During all this, our ‘great’ Hokage decided to go Rambo somewhere, just no one knew where. The council took over and was more assertive over the village, calling for what amounted to genocide in Yukigakure. Events happened there which brought some disarray to the village. Retards thinking that the ANBU was wrong, pushing the council into banishing them in a sense, casting them aside like they were the villains.

A little after the war with Snow, the team went on a mission, or so we thought. Really it was a sensei losing his mind, talking about some dumb conspiracy theory and attempting to go missing after killing a few Genin. Unfortunately for him, I had grown tired of his antics after hearing about him peeping on Ama in her own personal shower and showed the man what it was like to actually have someone worth fighting for.

After the village had heard about the incident, I was promoted to Chuunin along with Ama and Kana. The three of us inseparable and all that shit. But then things started to get dumb. Some crazy animal men things decided to come attack the village, and with the elite of the village gone, things were looking a bit bleak. Everyone was fighting for their lives, for their village but me, I was fighting to fight. I was fighting to protect a certain someone hoping that she’d find herself again. Who knows how that’ll turn out, with any luck, it’ll turn out for the best.


Thread Ratings:
Creation: 7 AP on stats[Chakra] { }
Truth About Bicycles: 1 Willpower, Katon Ryuuka no Jutsu
Anger Makes The Heart Grow Fonder: 1 Tactics
Collision of Fists: 2 Speed
A Little TLC: 1 Willpower, Danbira no Kyo Stage One
Portrait of a Hothead: 1 Reserves, Katon: Bounetsu no Jutsu
Little People: 2 Willpower, Hitoshizeru Bakuhatsu no Jutsu
City Streets: Retrospect:2 Tactics
A Little Downtime:1 Power, Katon: Kyuuka no Jutsu
Possibility: 2 Tactics
Subtle Unrest: 1 Strength, Katon: Nenshou Tosshin
Good Cop/Bad Cop: 2 Stamina
The Cool, The Sad, The Angry: Danbira no Kyou Stage Two
Taken: Danbira no Kyou Stage 3, 1 Strength
The Saddest of Returns: Gibbous Kaika, +1 Power
Support Network: Mikazuki, +1 Tactics
AP Injection: Tessayose no Jutsu, Katon: Myaku Hitofuki no Jutsu, Minor House Summons: Swarms
Bro Pound: +2 Willpower
Bee Mine: +2 Reserves
Shine Bright Tonight: +1 Control, +1 Intelligence
Megalomania: Katon Hidora no Jutsu, +1 Power
Exorcising Demons: +1 Willpower
The Catalyst: +2 Tactics
What I've Done: +1 Willpower, Kinpa Gaien
Happily Ever After: +1 Tactics, +1 Willpower
A Family Matter: +1 Control, +1 Reserves
A Supply of Sad Kid: +1 Control, Swarms: Blade Dance
Temple Run: +2 Control, +1 Power, GMAP: +1 Power
A Dedicated Hand: +2 Reserves
Bugging Out: +2 Intelligence, +1 Tactics
That's what you get: +1 Power, Katon Yurika no Jutsu
User Error: -----
Three's Company: +1 Tactics, Katon: Go
The Aftermath: +1 Intelligence, +1 Tactics
Dousing Flames: +2 Power
Weta Turnout: +1 Reserves, Shunshin
A New Leaf +1 Reserves, Kasai no Uzu
Where's Rachel?! +1 Reserves, Kage Bunshin, removed Stage 3 Danbiro
Home Again +2 Control, Katon: Taika no Jutsu, removed Stage 2 Special on Danbiro
The Dimming Spark +2 Willpower, +1 Control, removed Mikazuki
Silver Lining +1 Power, Hidden Centipede Hands, removed Stage 1 Special on Danbiro
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Old 04-25-2011, 05:07 AM   #2
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Stats and technicals work out. Approval.
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Old 04-25-2011, 12:09 PM   #4
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Old 04-30-2011, 02:43 PM   #5
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Here's the problem I have with characters created for the benefit of someone else. This one and Kana (the character, not you of course) both have very little substance of their own. Painful as it is for me to say, Ama is the only one who seems individual.

This biography, while it has all the ingredients needed to be successful, has very little individual flavor. It's basically glossing over the events that occurred in the other two biographies. Is there nothing notable for Takeo alone? No influence other than Ama and Kana?

I feel as though there's something missing, though it's not really my call to say what that is. This kid feels something like an angry robot that was quite obviously created to complete this trio. Surely something had to occur in his life apart from Ama and Kana that made him the way he is?
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Old 04-30-2011, 04:17 PM   #6
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I see where you are coming from WoF.... basically changed out the beginning of the bio, giving his personality more substance and fleshing him out a bit more. I hope that's what you are looking for.
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Old 04-30-2011, 05:03 PM   #7
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It's better. I can only assume that he'll further develop as an individual with use in roleplay.

Haha... dat min-maxing.

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