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Old 08-08-2017, 01:08 AM   #1
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Name: Shirantan Xing
Age: 19
Sex: F
Height: 5'5"

Character Type: Shinobi

Country/Village: Hidden Mist
Rank: Agent (chunin)
Division: Law Enforcement

Physical Description: Can't you tell? I'm cute. This hair is all natural, it's like a peach color. My eyebrows are definitely working out for me, they're groomed perfectly as that is the job of a lady, to maintain her sharp looks. My eyes are a bright blue, almost appearing a whitish gray color which is also natural. You like my lips? Hehe they're a tad plump I would say and they're a pinkish color.

I have an hourglass figure, you can run your hands down my body if you want to check. It's from the intense training I've undertaken to join the law enforcement division of the mist. I don't know if you would call me curvy, I do have my curves but I guess beauty is in the eyes of the beholder so I'll leave that statement to you. When in the battle field or while I'm on a mission I always wear my black tail coat. Under it would be a white tee-shirt or long-sleeve shirt. Those are my favorite colors so a lot my outfits follow the same black and white mix.

Below that I carry my belt which has a holster for my meteor hammers, my weapon of choice. They aren't that heavy but I've bashed my fair share of skulls in with it. I usually wear shorts or skirts as anything else feels a bit restricting, plus it is also the unspoken advantage of a kunoichi...hehe.

Below that I wear knee high leggings or stockings along with boots. Boots are some the best things ever created. They are super comfortable and sturdy in combat. I have many pairs! I don't think have to talk about my under garments at this point.... sooo, that's it for my wardrobe and looks.

Personality: If you couldn't tell, I'm pretty lax. You have to be as a kunoichi. I'm confident and a little flirtatious, but some people mistake these qualities as arrogance and self-absorption. I beg to differ. I give all my opponents respect, especially if they turn out to be my taste. I love all humans, they're very intricate and respond to similar situations in completely different ways as I've come to find out. It's a shame that I have to kill them but I don't hesitate. Tough love is how I view. With my attacks I express my love for my opponents. At this point of the game, I'm no newbie when it comes to murder.

I do like going on missions with others, it's much more fun in teams. I'm not extremely talkative but I do like to socialize with others. In the end though, I end up having a lot of me time. I usually spend my days on my own overlooking the village on the rooftops or laying near water and staring at the moon. I'm a simple woman when it comes to these things I suppose. That doesn't be little my love of people. I can't wait to meet you, friend or foe. Bold or bland. Ugly or hot. Boy or girl. Ready or not.

Nindo; "Way of the Ninja": Let me express how much I love you.

Clan/Bloodline: N/A

Primary Archetype:

Weapon Thrasher
Archetypes: Taijutsu Specialist – Kobudo Master
Combo Special: Once per thread, the Weapon Thrasher can (using his bludgeon) strike with two times his base Strength (no Strength bonuses are added on top of the activated Combo Special).
Primary: Physical
Secondary: Mental
Tertiary: Chakra
Stat Merit: +3 to Strength, +1 to Speed, +2 to Stamina
Stat Flaw: -2 to Reserves, -2 to Control, -1 to Power, -1 to Tactics

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Statistics

Physical - Primary

Strength: 1 + 3(Thrasher) +16 (Pool) = 20 + 15
Speed: 1 +1(Thrasher) +7 (Pool) = 9 + 12
Stamina: 1 +2(Thrasher) +7 (Pool) = 10 + 3

Mental - Secondary

Intelligence: 1 +6 (Pool) = 7
Tactics: 1 -1(Thrasher) +8 (Pool) = 8
Willpower: 1 +13 (Pool) = 14

Chakra - Tertiary

Power: 1 -1(Thrasher) +9 (Pool) = 9
Control: 1 -2(Thrasher) +10 (Pool) = 9
Reserves: 1 -2(Thrasher) +5 (Pool) = 4

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Jutsu and Techniques:

Sickle and Chain Style - Heaven and Hell

Stages 1, 2, 3
Stat Requirements: Strength 11, Speed 9, Willpower 8
Cumulative Bonuses: +15 Strength +12 Speed

Sanshi no Mizu (Water of Deep Reflection)

Stage 1
Stat Requirements:Strength 4, Speed 4
Cumulative Bonuses:+3 Strength, +3 Stamina, +3 Speed

Jouki Mizu (Steam Water) Ninjutsu
Stage 1
Jouki Soujuu (Steam Creation)
Requirements: Power--2, Intelligence--2

Stage 2
Umihebi no Ibuki (Serpent's Breath)
Stat Requirements: Power 6, Control 6, Tactics 4

Deguchi no Jutsu (Vent Technique)
Stat Requirements: Tactics 5, Intelligence 4, Willpower 4

Stage 3
Wakasu no Yoroi (Boil Armor)
Stat Requirements: Power 9, Control 9, Tactics 7

Universal Ninjutsu
Stage 1
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
Requirements: Power 2, Tactics 2

Stage 2
Kinobori/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Tree Walking / Wall Walking Technique)
Requirements: Power 5, Control 4, Reserves 4

Hidden Mist Ninjutsu
Stage 1
Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)
Requirements: Power 4, Control 4

Stage 2
Mizu Peretto (Water Pellet)
Requirements: Power 5, Control 4, Reserves 4



Inventory:

0 - Shinobi Kit
5 - Meteor Hanner (Soft Weapon(2) + Blunt Weapon(1) + Extending(2) + combined(0))
2 - Tanto (Small Weapon(1) + Hidden(1)

Item Points Remaining: 1

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Biography: As a kid raised by a monk and druggy, I'd say I came out pretty well. My mom wasn't a native to the hidden mist but instead was a traveling monk who had used a weapon which was an oddity throughout all the shinobi world. The meteor hammers, or Chui, were a rare weapon that required tons of practice just to consider yourself a beginner. My dad was an average sailor, carrying out the order of the water lord mechanically and getting his few drinks in when time would permit it, perhaps to make the painful reality of his dullness subside.

My parents had supposedly met when my mother was touring the mist. On her way to one of the islands, her ship had been attacked by pirates. They had apparently been really notorious and sank 3 cargo ships along with 2 cruises prior to that event. My dad was on board the ship and fought alongside the rest of the crew to force the pirates to retreat but they had been at a great disadvantage. The pirates were skilled swordsman, reports claimed they were a group missing-nin who had banded together as to live the life of thieves.

When all hope was lost, my mother had stepped up. She felt obliged to help the people on board, even if it meant losing her life. She wasn't going to go down without a fight. She had headed to the center of the debacle and as per monk teachings had first asked the pirates to leave the area peacefully. All the passengers stared at her wide eyed and my father couldn't believe the bravery of this foreign woman. Of course the leader of the band of thieves denied her request after laughing at her request. The pirates had proceeded taking the goods of the ship and ignored my mother all together, some even touched her inappropriately as they rushed past her. Lucky... pirates can be so cute. Anyway, she had been infuriated and whipped out her weapon. It was the ultimate tool of destruction in this scenario. Her advantage was that with the chui, she could keep the swordsman at a distance while dishing out quite the damage. She had caught them by surprise when she started swinging her hammer around, cracking skulls and knocking her opponents off the ship all in fluid motions. The pirates and passengers were in awe with my mother's unique choice of weapon and her skill with it. My dad especially. She had given the remaining crew the bit of courage they needed to subdue the pirates too. Though they didn't defeat the pirates, they had bought enough time for a warship to come to the aid of the tourists and crew and thus saved the lives on everyone on board.

The water lord had been so grateful for my mothers aid that he had given her a home in the village and allowed her to stay as a resident. Though she wanted to decline the offer originally, when my father expressed his admiration for her she decided to stay in the village and raise a family with him and so they did.

When I was born, my mother instantly knew she wanted to teach me the ways of the monk. She had taken me with her on strolls through the beach and nearby greenery as to show me at a young age the beauty of nature. My dad also came home after voyages telling us of all his whacky or downright awesome adventures. Everything had been going good for while... until it wasn't.

Eventually, I guess my father got bored of his family and began to drink a lot. He would come home from a day out at sea as drunk as a.. sailor.. and often had beaten my mother. She didn't want to fight back so he took advantage of her kindness and made this a common occurrence. Whenever this would happen my mom would send me to my room. All I could hear was "These bruises, they're proof of our love! You better be damn proud of them" or "I'm only hurting you because I love you idiot, look at me when I show you my love!" Things like that were my daily routine. My mother didn't want me to end up the same way so she signed me up for the academy and had me move in with my aunt, my father's sister.

This was a bittersweet time of my life. I saw my parents about once a month, sometimes my dad wasn't even home when I came to visit. This is when my mom had introduced me to the meteor hammer. She said she saw a lot of her in me and that I would put the hammers to better use than her. She had showed me a few practices to do as to better myself with the peculiar weapon. The week before my big graduation I had been out practicing with my training hammers (made of wood) on the shores near my aunt's house, just as my mom had taught me. I had been a little scared to fail and face my parents. Maybe then my father would... 'love' me too.

As hours passed and I was swallowed in thoughts and training a familiar voice called out for me. It was then that my aunt delivered the news. My mother was found dead behind her own home, a kunai wound found on her head. My father? His body was found 4 days later washed up on the beach. He had a kunai lodged in his heart and although sufficient proof wasn't found in the investigations, I knew he was the one who killed my mother and himself.

With the news of my parents death, my aunt wanted to pull me out of the academy. She thought I wasn't stable to participate in the exam but I assured her, this is what I wanted. The day before my big day my aunt had brought a gift for me. It was the chui my mother carried with her. It was all my aunt could bear to salvage from the household. Upon further inspection, I saw how charming the weapon was. I never left my home without it after that day.

My opponent was cute guy I wasn't too familiar with who specialized with a sword, shocker. I could tell from his look that he didn't want to lose. He came from a family of assassins and I had no doubt in my mind he would kill me if he had the chance and his family name would assure he didn't get into any trouble for it. What was going through my mind? Heh. I was wondering how big hi- well it doesn't really matter. I arose victorious though I teared up when I left so many bruises on his adorable face. It's alright though, each bruise was a form of expressing all the admiration I had for him. I moved on to be a sailor and I knew that I wasn't going to stop there.

Life at seas was definitely fun for me. With my two teammates and the rest of the crew, the high seas were no match for us. Sailor life was a breeze. My favorite mission being when we had to act like our ship was completely lost at sea with precious cargo to lure a band of pirates who had been a pain in the water lord's rear. I got to say, though barbaric, pirates are oddly cute. They had took the bait and boarded our ship. As they had so 'cunningly' tricked us into thinking they were sent by the water lord to guide us back and went to asses the cargo to make sure it was in tact, I popped out of the sea just below their boards which connected the two ships breaking them with my meteor hammers. With the majority of them stuck on our ship, my teammates had came out of hiding, Lu a swordsman and Rai a spearman. They had hacked away at the pirates with the help of our team captain as I went on the enemy ship. The pirates left on board their were all still shocked from the sudden change in scenario, confused as to what was going on. This gave me enough time to damage the ship enough for it to start sinking. Long story short. I kissed a teenage pirate and drowned all his friends, and him of course.

After that I guess a major event in my life was my advancement from Sailor to Agent. I knew I wanted to get into law enforcement division, it was a good chance to showcase my strength and meet tons of hot powerful men. I also knew that to do so, I would have to go through many trials and tribulations. I had exercised every chance I got and had my aunt test my knowledge every chance she got. I knew it would take more then exercise to get into the law enforcement division... so I took contracts in secret. I was payed a good amount to kill strong missing-nin and pirate captains. This was the most effective way of increasing my power, not to mention it gave me the opportunity to meet lots of cute guys. Of course I had to kill them all but that's besides the point. Even with my clear cut qualifications, I only barely made it into the division as so many shinobi sign up for the job. Nonetheless, I had acquired the job I wanted the most.

During the Seagull war I was also an active agent. Under the jurisdiction of my water lord though, we were put in embarrassingly horrible hands. When the other islands had risen against my lord, we were all ready to protect him and assure that the people of our nation stayed in their place but he refused to give any orders as to 'risk the lives of his supporters'. We were only sent on missions where it was almost a certainty that collateral damage could be avoided. This obviously wasn't going to win a war, to protect what you love you will have to witness and deliver pain. It definitely was a downer being on the losing side especially when we had the potential to win. However this is when the tables had turned. After a cunning coup carried out by our current Mizukage, Nemoha Maya, the war started to look a lot more fair. She had no problem annihilating the rebels with full force. She sure as hell didn't pull any punches.

Though my water lord had a point when he didn't want to have to harm his people even in spite of treason, it ultimately didn't make sense to pursue peace for our nation against warmongers to the point where the warmongers are the ones who end up leading our nation. Furthermore, choosing to fight the Mizukage for his place now was also a bad call. She had already demonstrated she could lead our people into victory. It does take more than one war to showcase a leader's strength to lead though so with that in consideration, the Mizukage doesn't really impress me beyond the Seagull conflict. Only thing is now I'm stuck in between a power struggle. Is the new Mizukage that fought for her position the ruler of the village hidden in the mist or does the water lord who refused to hurt his people retain the right he had been bestowed ceremonially? Where do I lie in all of this.... Regardless, as long as I keep getting sent on missions and improve as a kunoichi, I don't care. I always end up doing things my own way in the end anyhow.

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Old 08-08-2017, 07:21 PM   #2
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? If you couldn't tell, I'm pretty lax. You have to be as a kunoichi.
What? Since when?

I dunno what the heck is going on with your items. A meteor hammer (if I understand it right) would probably just be:

5 = 2 (Soft Weapon) + 1 (Hidden) + 2(Extending)

Then 0 for the shinobi kit

Then 2 for the Small Weapon + hidden

So something like this:
0 - Shinobi Kit
5 - Meteor Hammer (Soft Weapon(2) + Extending(2) + Hidden(1))
2 - Tanto (Small Weapon(1) + Hidden(1)

Might want to consider separating your your biography paragraphs. The big blocks of text can be hard on the eyes.

Half Approved since mechanically it's all sound. The first chunk of the bio is really more about her parents than herself though.
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What? Since when?

I dunno what the heck is going on with your items. A meteor hammer (if I understand it right) would probably just be:

5 = 2 (Soft Weapon) + 1 (Hidden) + 2(Extending)

Then 0 for the shinobi kit

Then 2 for the Small Weapon + hidden

So something like this:
0 - Shinobi Kit
5 - Meteor Hammer (Soft Weapon(2) + Extending(2) + Hidden(1))
2 - Tanto (Small Weapon(1) + Hidden(1)

Might want to consider separating your your biography paragraphs. The big blocks of text can be hard on the eyes.

Half Approved since mechanically it's all sound. The first chunk of the bio is really more about her parents than herself though.
Thanks for the advice! I used your formatting for inventory, it was messy idk how I overlooke that lol. I also tried to separate a few paragraphs. Hope it's more or less to your liking.
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You don't need a writing example, since you have Ryuuki already approved. Feel free to delete that.

Also, fix your tai bonuses. Only the highest one counts.

Otherwise we talked about this on Discord. Mist GM Approved and Half Approved
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You don't need a writing example, since you have Ryuuki already approved. Feel free to delete that.

Otherwise we talked about this on Discord. Mist GM Approved and Half Approved

Alright. I deleted it!
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Stats and jutsu check out. Approved

Edit Talking with VD about your items, I feel you are over paying for your meteor hammer if it's just a normal meteor hammer. A Kusarigama is rated at 3 (2 soft weapon + 1 bladed weapon) so I feel your weapon should be the same at 3 with 2 for a soft weapon +1 small blunt weapon +0 combined or whatever.

At the end of the day it's your call how you want your weapon points distributed but I feel like this would be more beneficial for you in the end. The hidden tag is more for a sword cane and the likes, where the weapon is disguised as something else.
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Edit Talking with VD about your items, I feel you are over paying for your meteor hammer if it's just a normal meteor hammer. A Kusarigama is rated at 3 (2 soft weapon + 1 bladed weapon) so I feel your weapon should be the same at 3 with 2 for a soft weapon +1 small blunt weapon +0 combined or whatever.

At the end of the day it's your call how you want your weapon points distributed but I feel like this would be more beneficial for you in the end. The hidden tag is more for a sword cane and the likes, where the weapon is disguised as something else.
I was thinking the same thing with the hidden modifier but I wasn't sure on the technicalities. Definitely comforting hearing that coming from you! Thanks for the helpful advice
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