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Old 11-28-2018, 02:00 AM   #1
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Default [Grass] Second, Minute, Hour

Starring: Shinshi Junichi as Batman
Co-Starring: Gonnohyoe as a punching bag


Part Two in the [Epidemic] Arc finds Junichi scrambling to save his research from profit-hungry thugs who want their cut of the pie. Gonnohyoe gets his just desserts from a lifetime of thievery, and chaos spills out into the streets of the slums like molten marshmallows on a sweet-potato casserole. Happy Thanksgiving by the way!
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Old 12-05-2018, 03:38 PM   #2
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I really liked it, can't wait to see more n_x
Oh look, its more!

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Old 12-05-2018, 05:51 PM   #3
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Well. That escalated quickly

So I'm torn, part of me wonders if it needed to be split up the way it was since no time passed between the two; but on the other hand the tone shifted so violently I guess it sort of makes sense. Plus that intro callback was pretty sweet so... I'll allow it.


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Its a strange dichotomy, really good writing, but also its writing about a ten year old being brutalised... Difficult to know how to feel n_x; But it was done very well, so good work.

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I think Junichi shined a little more in this half. He was devious before but this time he got to be truly duplicitous. If it wasn't for the nature of his work, I'm not sure I'd be able to root for him, which is an interesting angle for an arc protagonist, hope you keep exploring it.
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Old 12-05-2018, 06:52 PM   #4
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Two speed rates in a row! Christmas has come early.

I'd like to put one point in Speed, then take this technique:

Global Ninjutsu
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Chakra Kami Nawa (Chakra Hair Rope)
Requirements: Intelligence 5, Tactics 4, Willpower 4

Which can be copy-pasted into the sheet like this:
Chakra Kami Nawa (Chakra Hair Rope) Requirements: Intelligence 5, Tactics 4, Willpower 4

This can be added to his thread log like so:

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12/5/2018 [url=http://narutorp.net/showthread.php?p=469971#post469971]Second, Minute, Hour[/url] +1 Speed, Chakra Kami Nawa
Also it looks like the last thread point was added to Stamina rather than Speed. He should have +2 TP to Speed now. Thanks for the edits!
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Old 12-05-2018, 07:50 PM   #5
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Thanks for the rating again. I'll take another point in Intelligence and use the other to take Druid's Bane. I'll handle edits.
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