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Old 05-20-2019, 06:14 PM   #1
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Default [Mist] Chapter 0: A Fool's Errand

Chapter 0: A Fool's Errand
Myself as Ren.
Kurobae as Kenkaku.

Ren and yet an other genin go on an adventure in forbidden territory, and find out it's just some punks hunting for rank and title. Probably. Those ghost elephants might be part of a bigger story.

Probably best rated by a Mist GM. Thread followed a very loose plot suggestion by Junge (ghost elephants). Also, since we rescued the guys (spoilers!) it qualifies for a GMAP bonus, I believe.
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Old 05-24-2019, 02:24 PM   #2
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Claimed, rating up Sunday or earlier!
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Old 05-26-2019, 06:43 PM   #3
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Fairly average on the whole, I'd say. Despite the ghost elephants tagline, the preponderance of the thread was spent fighting average run of the mill whoevers, which was a bit disappointing. I thought I was told someone would be breaking into the eleven spears!

Though the thread was a bit rote in places and questionable in others, the fundamentals are sound enough for an averagish rating. Two points, one for jutsu for both. Opinions, and not much else, below!



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Old 08-30-2019, 06:27 PM   #4
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Thanks for the rating, as always, Junge.

I'll take a point into Tactics and a point into Stamina.
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¤Sajime Sahori, Jounin of Stone.
¤Kiku-ichimonji Jun'ko, ronin samurai.
¤Hatsuyuki Shiro, renegade shinobi.
¤Keisei Ranko, The Prince of the Keisei.
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