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Old 04-20-2017, 11:50 AM   #1
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Miyu and Hana are part of an escort through the boonies. This was going to be part one of two threads. I don't know what happened to that, maybe it will happen anyway, someday. But in the meantime, here's part one.
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This thread was a long time in the making and I see after many months we shut it down and put that nail in the proverbial thread coffin.

Here are my general thoughts: you both write well, and you do certain different things well. Kane's creeper Maiden was nice at being just a hair south of wicked, and I love the narrator aspect of showing all the red alerts that should be sounding. The dramatic irony was a great touch, I keep wanting Hana to notice that the Kami are NOT happy, but that's because I can read backwards. Miya was good at never being obvious in anything, and I definitely want to read more with her, because that secretly evil personality is such a good read.

Hana really impressed me with the teen girl shinobi aspect. I never forgot she was a teenager, evil when she was all bossy big girl boss on campus. I will say that I actually thought it out of character that she didn't pick up on more of what Miyu was doing, even though Kami-sense is totally different from anything she's used to. I loved the throw away archetype use, I've never seen someone use it and then disregard it, and I thought that was clever in both a mechanical sense and story wise.

Overall, I wasn't impressed with the quantity, as Wess was short of even a basic rating and Kaen slid by with a couple hundred over, but the entertainment makes up for it.

I will say this: I'm the king of fluff and I still felt it was almost entirely fluff. It was basically 30 minutes of real time action. They do a ritual and decide a course. That's it. I understand that after a year it's time to move on, so in a way I'm glad this is now over so those respective characters can jump into what's next.

Hana: One point. Stats or jutsu.
Kaen: Two points. Stats or jutsu.
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Old 04-22-2017, 02:38 PM   #4
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Thankya Mizu!

I'll be taking this opportunity to dump a little AP in, as well, because I want someone for her to talk to. Two AP spent, one to tactics, one to intelligence.

One TP spent on intelligence, last spent on Familiar, from the Paths of the Shrine Maiden.
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Thanks! I thought this thread had died. I'm trying to make that come back. This semester is almost over lol.

I'll take Kai in the Global Ninjutsu open slot for Power 10, Control 10, Willpower 8.

mizu: done~~

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