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Old 07-21-2008, 12:10 PM   #21
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Silf, that looks SO much better. The head shape is a little too narrow for me (think traditional basketball, with a triangle chin if you wanna be stock about it). But the eyebrows and the eyes look much better.

Also, the hair improved. Nice.
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Old 07-26-2008, 06:08 AM   #22
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<3 Mizu. =D

Yo, so I uh, made my first manga page ever. It's rushed and not very clean, not to mention some proportions are off and some lines need to be erased, but over all it could be a whole lot worse. I only used a reference for the first panel in the upper left. It's also not the first page in the chapter, go figure. It's a bit crowded, put too many panels on one page, me thinks.

The writing also sucks. xD


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Old 09-17-2008, 01:18 AM   #23
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