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    Kougoushii Tsukio - 16 - 5'7 - Chuunin [Amegakure]

    Nindo: "I won't let my family traditions hold me back."

    Physical Description/Clothing: Hair that was once short and messy has grown to reach the young girl's chest. However Tsukio cannot fight the natural forces of the dark locks. The once chaotic fashion of her hair has turned rough, matted strands into smooth, soft ones that require little to no effort to look good and frame her softly shaped jaw. Her eyes are a smokey brown, almost always glaring but as sweet as milk chocolate.

    A small, pointed nose rests in the center of her face, a few centimeters above warm, pink lips that rarely smile. But when the girl dares to, she reveals perfect, white teeth and dimples on either side. It is rather easy to discern between fake and real smiles. The fake ones never show her adorable dimples. People find her to be more attractive than she wants to be.

    Her muscles have been trained rigorously every day and it shows. Her body is toned, scarred, calloused, usually bruised or wounded, and Tsukio loves it. Her strength is evident and her demeanor can be threatening. She has faced the serious dangers of shinobihood and it is a fact that she advertises every day. A tattoo of a bird and the kanji symbol of strength rests neatly on her left bicep--a decision made in a state of absolute rebellion but one she does not regret.

    Her clothing is practical and she prefers it to not interfere with her movements. The girl's wardrobe differs from loose black sweaters to tight tank tops. It depends on her mood, the day, weather, and a variety of other conditions. But more often than not, Tsukio has modified herself to wear darker colors--blacks, grays, and the like. She wears a dark, hooded jacket with a skull embroidered on one arm and a tight-fitted dark shirt beneath. Jogging bottoms and ragged, dirty sneakers accompany the outfit.

    Personality: In one word, Tsukio can be described as a fighter. At least, that's the first impression she makes on people. Hell, the girl doesn't even talk to many people because she spends her time training inside her family gym - probably the only member of the family who actually uses it. Even if she tries to become warmer towards people, the girl only grows cold colder.

    Tsukio is always under pressure, always trying to push herself beyond the limit. She's not the kind of girl who is happy if she manages to 'wing' something, but she's actually an overachiever. But when she does get something, the girl wants people to recognize that she was the girl who did something that no one could. She likes attention, despite being a very solitary person.

    Most people think she's strong and has no weak points, thus they believe she's not vulnerable. That's not true because she is actually very weak. No one ever sees her cry, but it's only for one reason and that is because she's afraid if she starts then she won't stop. But either way Tsukio is very courageous and has a kind heart. It's just deep within her and she needs someone who will show her that life isn't all about fighting.

    Combo Archetype: Juggernaut
    Archetypes: Taijutsu Specialist – Human Tank
    Combo Special: The player can resist physical damage from all sources of damage for 2 posts. The Juggernaut has to remain in motion during this period of time and cannot use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. As soon as the Juggernaut comes to a halt, the effect ends, even if the Juggernaut is technically allowed to keep moving for more posts. This can only be used once per thread.
    Description: The Juggernaut is a moving mountain of a human being. Completely ripped to the max with muscles growing off of other muscles, these tremendous Shinobi are unmatched in terms of physical strength. Their knowledge of Ninjutsu and Genjutsu may be lacking, but their ridiculous level of brawn is enough to make anybody tremble in fear just upon seeing them.

    Keen Eyes
    Blessed with remarkable eyesight, there is nothing that gets by the user. Their power of sight, whether or not it is 20/20, is sharper than most. They have a knack for finding whatever they happen to be looking for, and no detail, no matter how small, slips by them. It takes them only moments to find whatever it is they’re looking for, and if they do not see it they can say with confidence that it is not there—or just hidden very well. This can be as simple as finding keys in a messy room or impressive as picking out a face in a crowded square.


    Physical [Primary]

    Strength: 1+1[T]+2[HT]+10[F]+6[TH] = 20 [+10 RSWG] = 30
    Speed: 1+1[T]-2[HT]+11[F]+2[TH] = 13 [+6 RSWG] = 19
    Stamina: 1+1[T]+1[HT]+9[F]+1[AP]+6[TH] = 18 [+12 RSWG] = 30

    Mental [Secondary]

    Intelligence: 1+10[F] = 11
    Tactics: 1+9[F] = 10
    Willpower: 1+8[F]+5[TH] = 14

    Chakra [Tertiary]

    Power: 1-1[T]+8[F] = 8
    Control: 1-1[HT]+7[F] = 7
    Reserves: 1-2[T]+9[F]+9[TH] = 17


    Right Season Worker's Glove
    [F1-F3/TP] Stage 4
    Requirements: 17 Stamina, 16 Strength, 10 Speed, 14 Reserves
    Bonuses: +12 Stamina, +10 Strength, +6 Speed
    Special Techniques:
    [F4] Foot Trap
    Requirements: Power 2, Reserves 2
    [GMAP] Stomach Twister
    Requirements: Power 7, Reserves 7, Control 6

    Celestial gates
    [F5]Kai-Mon (Initial Gate)
    Requirements: Stamina 4, Strength 4
    [F6]Kyu-Mon (Heal Gate)
    Requirements: Stamina 8, Strength 6, Willpower 6
    [F7]Sei-Mon (Life Gate)
    Requirements: Stamina 12, Strength 8, Willpower 8
    [TP] Sho-Mon (Harm Gate)
    Requirements: Stamina 18, Strength 14, Speed 11, Willpower 14

    Kuro Suiton
    Stage One
    [F10] Abura Ryuushutsu (Oil Slick)
    Requirements: Control 3, Intelligence 2
    [F11] Abura Aruki (Oil Walking)
    Requirements: Power 3, Willpower 2
    Stage Two
    [F12] Santoarukari Fuchi (Acid Edge)
    Requirements: Power 5, Control 4, Reserves 4
    [AP] Santoarukari Kawarimi (Acid Kawarimi)
    Requirements: Intelligence 7, Tactics 7, Control 6
    [GMAP] Makkuro Dandoudan
    Requirements: Power 7, Control 7, Intelligence 6
    Stage Three
    [TP] Makkuro Henpuku (Tar Bats)
    Requirements: Intelligence 9, Tactics 9, Control 7
    [GMAP] Makkruohougan (Cannon Ball of Tar)
    Requirements: Intelligence 8, Tactics 6, Willpower 8

    Global Genjutsu
    Stage One
    [GMAP] Bunshin No Jutsu (Clone Technique)
    Requirements: Control 2, Intelligence 2

    Kunai [2]
    Senbon [2]
    Explosive Tags [4]
    Hallucinogenic Poison [3]

    Weapon Points Remaining: 9





    Dammit, go faster! Hook from your right, kick from the side. Under! Above! Look out! Duck, and then continue. Don't you dare get tired. No, don't stop, keep going. So what if your fists hurt, let them bleed. You'll prove them all wrong at least, you're not some spoiled brat, you're a fighter. You'll prove them all wrong...

    I was born in to a family with power and money. My mother, who looks much older than she actually is, is a very well known woman for only one reason, she married my father. He's one of the world's best business men, especially in such a place as Amegakure.

    You'd think how can I live here, but my mom and dad actually like it... I mean, the noble Kougoushii family decided to live here. It doesn't matter where we move, though... Business follows us and it's all because my dad knows how to run it.

    Even in living underground and hiding away from the world, my father keeps making money. Personally, I hate it. Even with people, even with lights and everything, I feel like a rat going through tunnels. Life in Sector One, as loud as it might get, you still feel trapped in this cage we call Amegakure...

    I was the third child, born after an older brother and an older sister. Becoming a shinobi... I had never considered it, living with luxury and everything I can ever want. I wore dresses made from silk, ate the best imported foods, received the best education, and never even thought of those people who fought for their countries --

    Shit! It hurts, dammit. No, I can't stop, you can't stop. You gotta keep going. Hit it, don't miss, keep your eye on the prize. Forget about the pain, forget about everything, forget it all. Just focus on the ball and hit it was fast as you can, it's called a speed ball for a reason. Raise your speed, faster, faster! No, that was sloppy. Do it again!

    You need to be perfect, dammit!

    I-I was attacked, when I was younger, ambushed, almost kidnapped, whatever. Being rich and powerful wasn't all that great because you always received threats about being killed or something. My family, despite acting like it was no big deal, hired shinobi to be with us all the time. The one assigned to me, at first, I thought he was a giant nuisance and hated him.

    But then, one day at the park, I ran from him and tried to get away. I would've died if he didn't save me that day. A rival of my father's company tried to steal me, but then the shinobi saved me... Seeing how he fought, with such pride and bravery... His grace and the way he moved, I was inspired.

    I decided to join the Academy.

    My mother and father hated the idea, but I wouldn't leave them alone so they decided to finally make me stop whining and sent me in to the school. I regret none of it, none of the training, waking up early and going to bed late, nothing.

    At first, I didn't feel like I fit in because I was the girl who the long hair, with the pretty smile, with all the money and the best lunches. I guess they were jealous and were always picking on me, throwing down my lunches, making me cry...

    But there was one thing that they never did and that had been take away my pride.

    Life was hard for me, the soon to be Genin, and I finally made one friend. He was a great boy, and I wish I was still friends with him, but due to an honest mistake we separated. I never meant for it, but it happened with giant consequences.

    The last thing I could remember was just training, night and day, always by myself. I cut all my hair, I stopped talking with people, I just became... lonely.

    Fuck! That hurt, don't cry! Don't cry, don't cry! I don't want to see one tear, I don't want to taste the salty flavor, I don't want you to fuckin' get all sobby from this! Just keep punching that bag. Yes. Yes! YES!

    ... You did it! You finally punched a hole through it, look at how that sand pours out, how it's just going so quickly and... I-I stopped training... No! I'll get someone to clean this later, I have to continue!

    I graduated, one of the best taijutsu specialists in the class. My family didn't attend my graduation, they had to go to a meeting somewhere in the country and were gone for awhile.

    Life hadn't been hard for me, but it had been horrible since my family looked down on me - being a shinobi and whatnot. I guess they didn't want their little princess Tsukio to be that girl who'd be fighting and protecting her country, right? Of course not.

    But one day, I was feeling... Brave. I took a mission, just me and my team. I mean, all we had to do was deliver some message, but things got outta hand. You know, we got ambushed. While jumping, tree to tree with that envelope in Sensei's pocket, somebody found us.

    It was hard, really hard... Sensei... I had never seen him so serious, protecting me, but I protected myself, too! But it was crazy, man. It was like fighting with my trainer, except he was stronger. My teammates cracked under pressure, I didn't. Sensei told me to stay away, but I couldn't.

    I knew I had to do something, I had to help them. Sensei was going to pass out and my teammates weren't going to get out there. They're pussies.

    But... I did it.

    I told them to leave and that I'll get them away, out of trouble. At first, they were hesitant but I had been the only one willing to fight and they knew that I had pride for my Amegakure. They put their faith in me, they knew that no one else was going to stop him. He was going to folow us if he left, so a distraction was needed. I took the chance.

    They took once last glance at me, tears in their eyes, but I didn't cry. I don't cry. My eyes felt hot and they burned as I ran in to action.

    But. I. Did. Not. Cry.

    Everyone thought I died. But no... I came back, no, I came back. It hurt, it hurt so much, but I smiled. They all smiled, tears in their eyes, but I didn't cry when I saw them, I laughed. They saw the body of the nukenin who ambushed us, they saw him - dead, on my back. I knew if Sensei didn't weaken him, then we'd all have been dead. But he weakened him for a purpose, for my time to shine and come back. From that day on, I knew I would have more responsibility.

    At 14, I was leading my team when Sensei was away. I had already proven myself and they just wanted to see some more Tsukio in action. Hell, I raised my fists up, cheering for myself silently. And that was when I took the next step.

    Tsukio, the rookie Chuunin. Has a ring to it, yeah?

    Thread Log:
    02/24/09 2 GMAP
    03/07/09 Foot vs. Fist +2 Speed
    07/03/09 Protection +3 Stamina, + 1 GMAP Stomach Twister
    11/07/09 Help! +2 Reserves, Bunshin no Jutsu
    02/09/10 You've Got Meal +2 Strength
    04/29/10 Photography +2 Reserves
    06/25/10 Honey + 2Reserves
    08/16/10 Hefty Hefty Hefty +1 Stamina, Right Season's Worker Stage Four.
    03/28/11 Dancing Dresses +1 Reserve, Needle Art: Beacon
    04/16/11 Keen Eyes
    06/17/11 Gifts of Beauty +1 Stamina, Tar Bats
    05/28/14 A Downpour +2 Strength
    09/21/14 Sugar Rush +1 Reserves, +1 Stamina, Removed Senpuu no Yadama
    09/22/14 Abhorrent Torrent +2 Willpower, Removed Kurinuku Senbon, GMAP [Makkuro Dandoudan]
    11/08/14 Purple Rain +3 Willpower, Removed Projectile list
    12/11/14 Ibis Iris +1 Willpower, Sho-mon, Makkruohougan
    01/26/15 What Falls After the Rain +2 Strength

    [Katsumi] - [Maho] - [Tomoko] - [Tsukio] - [Ritsuke] - [Shiori] - [Miyuki]

    Grass Secondary GM
    [9:07:30 PM] M.Cain: She's been super important her whole life,
    and super important to Grass for like a few years.


  • #2
    Little Tsukio... frickin' yeah man! The only glaring problem I see is that your weapon points say you have sixteen of them remaining when you really don't, but that's no reason to hold an EoE stamp of approval from you.


    been driving ms. daisy
    Let's RP & stuff. But be patient I'm still a n00b.

    Swap Thread & Weapon Thread & AP Management


    • #3
      Most people imagine Amekagure to be a ghetto
      Most people didn't know Amegakure existed until... a year or so ago?

      It would be nice to add some mention of the Amegakure's unique location and "village" style. (Mainly that they live in sewerage system and hides from the rest of the world).
      Last edited by Rizhou; 02-22-2009, 04:48 AM.

      AP: 47


      • #4

        Okay, done. Also, question, seeing as how she took the Right Season Worker's Glove, would I need to buy special gloves or should I just keep it as it is with gloves mentioned in her clothing description?

        [Katsumi] - [Maho] - [Tomoko] - [Tsukio] - [Ritsuke] - [Shiori] - [Miyuki]

        Grass Secondary GM
        [9:07:30 PM] M.Cain: She's been super important her whole life,
        and super important to Grass for like a few years.



        • #5
          No chuunin exams in Ame, DB! >: O
          Okada Ko; Kiri-nin


          • #6
            D: I knowz, but supposedly she was in the one that was just held [since a Rain team was actually in it] and became chuunin back in Ame.

            Is that not allowed? ._.
            LOOK HERE PLZ

            [Katsumi] - [Maho] - [Tomoko] - [Tsukio] - [Ritsuke] - [Shiori] - [Miyuki]

            Grass Secondary GM
            [9:07:30 PM] M.Cain: She's been super important her whole life,
            and super important to Grass for like a few years.



            • #7
              Not unless your char was actually in it...

              As for the gloves, you don't have to make unique ones.

              AP: 47


              • #8
                Okay, edited.
                LOOK HERE PLZ

                [Katsumi] - [Maho] - [Tomoko] - [Tsukio] - [Ritsuke] - [Shiori] - [Miyuki]

                Grass Secondary GM
                [9:07:30 PM] M.Cain: She's been super important her whole life,
                and super important to Grass for like a few years.



                • #9
                  Half Approval.

                  AP: 47


                  • #10
                    You put a youtube link in your bio.


                    Oh, alright... Approved.


                    • #11
                      [Edit:] WOAH, YOU LIKE, COVERED EVERYTHING I ASKED.

                      Thus, here's the Amegakure GM Approval (with a real approval thrown on there.)
                      Last edited by Juushichi; 02-24-2009, 01:13 PM.
                      [Kirigakure] Imai Hayate [Kusagakure] Kiyomizu Shusui
                      [Kumogakure] Matsuoka Imae [Konohagakure] Ohayashi Toshiko
                      Current Owner of: [Legendary] The Peregrine: Shimizu Miho
                      Items, Hijutsu, Roleplay


                      • #12
                        Amg, used 2 GMAP for like Rain chars in registry. Tsukio's still here so yeah :<

                        Got a jutsu and used one point in stamina.

                        Also, shouldn't she, like, be moved out or something?
                        LOOK HERE PLZ

                        [Katsumi] - [Maho] - [Tomoko] - [Tsukio] - [Ritsuke] - [Shiori] - [Miyuki]

                        Grass Secondary GM
                        [9:07:30 PM] M.Cain: She's been super important her whole life,
                        and super important to Grass for like a few years.