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    Thread: Assassinate The Rogue Country

    65 posts
    22,135 words

    Characters:
    Kana: Ichirano Tetsunoske - 27 posts - 9,582 words
    l337Gosu: Yuttarishita Kaosu - 26 posts - 9,329 words
    DarkBeauty: Sato Akira [NPC/Inelligible] - 12 posts - 3,324 words

    A rather routine assassination mission for two members of the Interrogation and Espionage Bureau quickly turns to crap when one of them is held hostage and their cover is blown. Soon they must fight their way out while still struggling to meet their mission objectives and kill the powerful Jounin-leader of a rebel political party.

  • #2
    This one is mine.
    Has been on Engi longer then kyz.

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    • #3
      Kana
      Technical Quality – 12
      Quantity/Length – 14
      Roleplaying/Combat – 12
      Points – 2

      l337Gosu
      Technical Quality – 12
      Quantity/Length – 14
      Roleplaying/Combat – 13
      Points – 3

      Darkbeauty
      Points – 1 GMAP for your NPC work

      Basically, good job on the length of the thread. It was a pretty good length. For grammar stuff, no real complaints. However, I would have liked some more stuff before the mission and after it. Some posts detailing how they got to the country and how they left the country, especially after having killed a bunch of people and destroying a pretty important place. Less posts on fighting would have been appreciated, with more posts on what I just mentioned.
      Has been on Engi longer then kyz.

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      • #4
        uh yes yay

        Using it on Maho. She's gonn get this:

        Hitoshizeru Bakuhatsu No Jutsu (Hidden Explosion Technique)
        Type: Ninjutsu
        Requirements: Power 8, Control 8, Reserves 6
        Description: A simple yet effective technique that forces chakra out from the entire body, blowing out smoke and any small surrounding debris. This causes confusion, and allows the user to escape unnoticed. Useful for sneaky exits. This technique is basically the same as using a smoke bomb, and cannot be used for offensive purposes. It simply creates a large cloud of smoke to allow the user to escape.

        stage three, global ninjutsu! :]

        thanku<3
        LOOK HERE PLZ


        [Katsumi] - [Maho] - [Tomoko] - [Tsukio] - [Ritsuke] - [Shiori] - [Miyuki]

        Grass Secondary GM
        [9:07:30 PM] M.Cain: She's been super important her whole life,
        and super important to Grass for like a few years.


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        • #5
          +1 Willpower (TP)
          +1 Speed (TP)

          the boost in Willpower allows me to take this Stage 5 Mist Genjutsu...

          Suishibari no Jutsu (Water Bind Technique) (Thread Point)
          Requirements: Reserves 17, Control 16, Power 16, Willpower 15

          If you could also add this into my Thread Log, that'd be appreciated. Thanks for rating the thread Meno.

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